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kousagi12
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- 2020.07.18
I live on the 18th floor of an apartment complex near by the Lotte World. My apartment is little nature friendly and I love it. I have a kitchen, living room, and bed rooms.
1) 좋아하는 방
Of those, the room I like the most is, my bedrooms. Which is right beside the living room. My bedroom is not very large and also I use with my little sister.
But I like it, sister and I use bunk bed. So when I go to the second floor bed I can see the lake. In spring, I can see cherry blossom road with lake and it looks really pretty.
Of all the rooms in my house, my bedroom is especially my favorite place that I can relax freely. Sometimes, I want to have my own room but use it with my sister is
pretty fun. So I love it.
2) 현재/ 과거 집 비교
About 10 years ago, the place where I grew up in an apartment in Suwon with my family. It was not very different from where I live now, but that apartment
complex had a lot activities that people can play with neighbors. In contrast, the apartment complex I've lived does not have any interaction activities with neighbors.
But except that now I live in Seoul and the location of my home is really middle of Jamsil so it is very easy to go somewhere.
3) 집에서 겪은 경험/문제
A big problem I had with my apartment was water leaking from living room windows.
Few years ago, rain fell very hard and after that day I saw the woods of living rooms colors had changed. It looks like the woods soaked water and had a mold infestation
I told to my parents, and mom called a service engineer. It was quite big construction because engineer said he had to coat under of the woods. It took several
days until everything up. By this happening parents and I learned that if we moved to another home, we have to double check about living room windows.
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