Hello, my name is 이름 , and I am 나이 old.

I am currently looking for a job.

My major was 전공.

I would like to find a position as a research assistant in a laboratory.

Right now, I live with my parents in an apartment of Suwon.

My family consists of three members: my father, my mother, and me.

I don’t have any brothers or sisters so I’m lonely sometimes.

As for my personality, I think I am a friendly and positive person.

In my free time, I like to listen to music. I also enjoy going jogging on weekends.

처음 써보는 거라 책과 거의 동일하게 썼는데 밑에서 세번째 줄이 조금 마음에 걸리네요ㅠㅜ 이렇게 써도 되나요??

그리고 책에 나온 것과 동일하게 써도 점수에는 지장이 없나요?