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주제: 집 첨삭부탁드립니당

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  • 2019.06.19
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I would like to know where you live. Descrive your house in detail.

what does it look like? how many rooms do you have? which is your favorite room at home?

I live in a three bedroom apartment with my family.

There is living room, the kitchen, the bathroom and the balcony.

My mom likes to make a all of room is white.

That's why my house always look brightly.

Also, she always clean all house everyday because she hates dirty absolutely.

So I have to clean my house every weekend.

Among the rooms, my favorite room would have to be my bedroom.

My bedroom make me feel so cozy.

I can do anything in my room. like listen to music, eat some snack and watch movies.

So overall, this is the reason why I love my bed room.

 

Now, tell me about the things that you do at home. what are some daily routines you engage in? what is special activity? give me all the details.

Firstly, when I wake up in the morning, I have to tidy up in my bed.

And eat some breakfast myself. I make a food for diet, So I eat all meals without family.

next routine is my favorite, I get some coffee in my room.

Then I start to own my work like study, make up, work out and so on.

Also, my special activity is watch movies with my sister.

especially, I love that time.

So overall, these are my daily routines at home.

 

Now, tell me about the problems you have experienced at home. what were those problems? How did they occur? How did you deal with those problems?

I remembered a time when I made a christmas tree at 9.

In my art class, I learned how to make a christmas tree.

I was so excited for give to my mom.

my mom was so happy about that. Then after I made tree all day.

But the tree was so weak and fluttered in whole house.

glitter was so sticky. So my family had to clean it up all day.

Ever since, I never can't make a christmas tree. 

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