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- 2018.10.25
5. 공연, 콘서트 보기
1) 내가 갔던 콘서트
Last month I went to a concert by my favorite group, MC THE MAX.
2) 콘서트가 열렸던 장소
The concert was at a lage auditorium in Sejong.
The auditorium was not only big, but also very modern.
3) 함께 콘서트에 갔던 사람
I went to the concert with my friends, who are fans of MC THE MAX as well.
We had a great time.
I really enjoyed the whole experience.
4) 공연 보러 가는 빈도
I go to plays once or twice a year.
I usually see them with my friends.
5) 공연 전 하는 일
I always read reviews on the Internet before the play.
6) 공연 후 하는 일
I always discuss the performance with my friends after the play.
We usually do this in a nearby coffee shop.
4. 영화보기
1) 가장 좋아하는 영화 장르
I love action films the best.
Action movie are very fantastic.
2) 그 장르를 좋아하는 이유
I like them because they relieve my stress.
3) 좋아하는 영화배우 이름
I like many actor, But I like Natale Portman the best.
She’s my favorite actress.
4) 배우를 좋아하는 이유
Because She can play many different character types.
She also has a very unique face.
She was very beautiful in the moive.
5) 가장 기억에 남는 영화
The most memorable moive I’ve seen is Leon.
6) 영화 관람 전 하는 일
I usually buy popcorn and sode before the moive.
I also make sure to go to the restroom before the movie.
7) 영화 관람 후 하는 일
After the movie, I usually talk about it with my friends.
3. 동네 및 이웃
1) 내가 사는 동네
I live in the Sejong city.
My home is very close to Chochiwon Station.
2) 동네에 있는 시설
There are many apartment buildings in my neighborhood.
It has a big supermarket and a River Park.
3) 동네의 모습, 분위기
My neighborhood is very clean and nice.
It is a good place to live.
4) 이웃의 모습, 분위기
I think my neighbors are friendly and nice.
They are married and have two young children.
5) 동네에서 최근 겪었던 경험
I recently had an interesting experience in my neighborhood.
A famous actor came to the here and took a picture with him.
6) 그것을 경험했던 시기
That was about two years ago. I was very happy.
2. 사는곳
1) 집의 형태
I live in a studio apartment near the River Park.
2) 집의 모습, 분위기
My house is very clean and modern.
My home has white walls and wooden floors.
3) 집에 있는 방, 공간
There are three bedrooms, a kitchen, and a living room.
The living room has a balcony with a great view of the mountains.
4) 방에 있는 가구, 가전제품
I have a bed, a bookshelf, and a closet im my room.
There is also a desk and a computer where I study.
5) 최근 집에준 변화
I recently redecorated my living room.
I replaced the old wallpaper.
6) 변화된 후 모습, 분위기
The new wallpaper has a bright and modern design.
It made the room brighter.
I am very happy with my living rooms now.
1. 자기소개 <나 홀로 거주>
Hello Eva, My name is Kigeun, and I am Thirty-Four years old.
I am currently single.
I live alone in a studio apartment.
My home is close to the River Park.
In my free time, I like to jogging in the park.
This is my favorite pastime.
Because it is good for my health.
These days, my goal is to improve my life.
Last month I went to a concert (by my favorite group) by가 아닌 of를 ㅊㅊ
The concert was at a lage auditorium in Sejong. 스펠링 오류 large로 수정 ㅊㅊ
The auditorium was not only big, but also very modern. 이건 도저히 말이ㅜㅜ 무슨 말을 하고 싶으신건가용ㅜㅜ?
Action movie are very fantastic.
I like many actor, But I like Natale Portman the best. 수의 일치 해주세요!
A famous actor came to the here and took a picture with him. to the here이 무엇일까용
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