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(1) Q. 집묘사 관련 질문

A. I live in a three-bedroom apartment, and it is on sixth floor of 17-story apartment building in daegu city.

On the left there is a living room and a master bedroom. on the right is a dress room, next to the dress room, you can see my bedroom.

The space I like the most in my home has got to be my bedroom and there are several reasons for my preference.

To start with, my bedroom is just for me and it's the place where I can spend time all by my self without and distractions.

What's more, my room has fantastic view of the river that runs through the city. the river is called DongHa.

Whenever I need time to collect my thoughts, I look out the windows and enjoy the DongHa river view. My bedroom is

a perfect fit for me!

(2)

Q. 좋아하는 방

A. I live on the sixth floor of an apartment complex. My apartmaen is quiet snug, and I like living in it vert much.

I've got a kiitchen, a living room, a dress room, and bedrooms. of those, the room I like the most is my bedroom, which is located in the front of the apartment.

My bedroom is my safe haven. there are several reasons. It's got a soft mattress and a thick, blue blanket.

However, what sets this room apart from the others is that the window looks out over the river view behind my apartment building. whenever I open it, I can clear my thoughts. Among all the rooms in my house, my bedroom is definitely my favorite place to hang out without a doubt.

(3)

Q. 집 비교

A. When I was a child, I lived in a detached house. It was the place where I grew up, and it was vert different from where I live now.

Back then, i lived in a small, two-bedroom detached house in a quiet neighborhood.

Every room had small size. But large windows in living room, that let in lots of sunlight. So the interior of the house created a warm atmosphere.

Though, the supermarket was 30 minutes away. It was vert inconvenient.

In contrast, my current home is a spacious apartment. since the place is large, it has a lively atmosphere. My house is

conveniently located near many good restaurants and cafes. there are many amenities, such as health club and park within walking distance. Also,

living in th city makes it easier to have a social life.

(4)

Q. 집에서 겪은 일

A.

Unfortumately, the plumber wasn't able to come immediately. Three hours later, when he did arrive, the flood had spread to the dining room.

I tried to get a hold of the situation, and It took several hours to clean everything up.

By the time, I was done, I was throughly exhausted. I realized from that experience that I needed to learn how to fix the toilet myself.

By donig this, I would be able to prevent this situation from ever happening again.

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