● l live in an apartment near the Yang-Jae river.

My house is very clean and modern.

My home has white walls and wooden floors. -> My house is decorated with white walls and wooden floor.

There are three bedrooms in my house.

It also has two bathrooms, a kitchen, and a living room.

The living room has a balcony with a great view of the mountains.

● My room is clean and well-organized.

It has large windows, so it is very bright and cheerful.

My room is also large, so I can keep many things in it. -> put many stuff there도 괜찮을 듯합니다. 

I have There are a bed, a bookshelf, and a closet in my room.

There is also a desk and a computer where I study.

● We usually have to -> have to는 이 문장에서 어울리지 않을듯 합니다. do housework and relax toghter at home.

When We are at home, We have to clean our house.

I wash the dishes while My husband vacuums the floor and takes out the garbage. -> 남편이 ~하는 동안 나는 ~한다로 수정하였습니다. 

My baby plays alone.

After We finish cleaning, and take a rest.

I enjoy spending time with my family.

※ 궁금한 점

1. 단어, 문맥이 괜찮은가요? -> 수정했습니다. 

2. house vs home 의 차이는? 문장에서 어떤 단어를 써야할지 알려주세요. -> 밑에분이 잘 설명해 주셨네요 

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home은 주로 건물 이상의 것을 의미해요!
단순히 집 자체가 아니라 집 이상의 의미를 가지고 있어요.
예를 들면 우리가 자신의 집이나 가족과 함께 지내는 집,
고향, 시설 등을 home을 이용해서 나타낼 때가 많아요

house는 건물만을 말할 때 주로 사용해요!
he went into the house. 여기서 집은 단순히 집 이라는 건물을 나타내요