Q11. 요즘 어린이들이 과거 어린이들에 비해 독립적이라는 건에 동의하는가?



I disagree that children nowadays are more independent than the past.



There are some reasons why I think so.



First, Children nowadays are immature and out of control so they do not know what is right or what is wrong. Also, thesedays, the economy is very bad and the price is very high. But, children do not have ability to earn money by themselves. So they should receive allowance from their parents.



Second, Children nowadays absolutely need parents emotional help because they are mpre weak, sensible, and dependent on their parents. For this reasons, they should be supervised carefully until they become adults.



For example, I'm working at July elementary school.



I scolded my student yesterday but she just cried. I feel embarrassed.



Everyone will think the same.