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답변 틀리지않고 다 잘말한 것 같은데 생각보다 점수가 너무 낮게나와서 속상하네요.

천천히 말하더라도 발음을 연습해야할까요?

파트 1 : 무난하게 얘기함 마지막 한 단어정도 다시 얘기함

파트 2 :

This picture was taken outdoor market

what i first notice is a woman who is hoding a blue jacket.

I think she is putting some fruits into the plastic bags.

In front of her..(앞이 아니라 뒤여서 잘못말함)

Behind his..behind her,

there is a women who is looking at some friuts.

Also i can see some fruits displayed on the shelves.

In the background i can see some buildings. and the cars parked... can be seen as well

Overall. it look like these people having...are having(문법 틀려서 다시 얘기함) a nice day.(두번정도 버벅이고 다시 얘기했네요)

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파트 3 ; 인터넷 관한 문제

4. how often 핸드폰 얼마나 자주 사용하며 무엇을 위해 쓰니?

i use the smartphone 5times a week. and i use it for studying. because i can get useful information. it makes me feel better.

5. 어떤 기기로 인터넷을 하니?

I have a smartphone. due to the advanced in technology, i haver smartphone. i can access the internet anytime anywhere

6. 회사에서 동료들과 얘기할때 메시지로 할래 전화로 할래?

I preper to talk telephone.

because i can ask the questions and get answer right away. so it is very incon..(잘못말함) it is very convinent. so i can save the travel time.

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파트 4. 세미나

7. 첫번째 세션 뭐고 어떤거니?

잘말함

8. 내가 9시까지 도착 못할것같은데 어떡하니?

The first will start at 9am. you can do that

(잘 말한건가요??)

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9. 런치이후 일정

there are two on thre list.

잘 말함

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파트5: 공원에 쓰레기가 너무많다 직원들이 치우는데 예산 없어

hello this is 누구 calling.

from what you mentioned during the meeting and understand that you need a way to solve problem about cleaning the park.

you have a tight budget.

this is indeed a problem, i have some solutions.

first of all, you should post an advertisement on local community website and local news papers.

many people have a smartphone. so they can access the internet anytime anywhere. so many people will show that. also you should make the campaign about the clening park. becuase many people put more importance on environment.

Also you should offer the small gifts to the participants. many people will show interst.

please free to contact me if yoy have any questions.

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파트 6: 직원들이 함께 운동하면 좋은점?

i think the benefit of this paractice( 문법을 잘못말한듯)

it makes employees feel better. many employees are exhasteted from too much work. it gives them a lot of pressure. they want to relive therir stress.

Also they can build good relationsship

And they can build good teamwork.

Teamwork has become in modern society.

in the past people were not very interested in teamwok.however things are different now. many people put more importance on temwork.