파트3 하나를 좀 절어서....ㅜㅜㅜ 파트5-6는 잘한고같은데 둘다 5점만점에 몇점 나올지좀 봐주세요ㅠㅠ

파트5- 우리회사 피트니스 센터가 퇴근후에 몰린다 직원들 모두 공평하게 대해주고 싶은데 어떻게?

Hi im kelly returning your call
I just listened to your message and you have a problem with company fitness gym
In that case, why don’t we Reflect it in their performance evaluation if they increase their department sales and then, choose the employees based on their performance evaluation
By doing so we will decrease the number of inconvenience
Theses are my suggestions, if you have any quality please call me back thank you!

파트6– 학교는 학생들에게 과목 선택을 하게 해야하는지
I agree that~~
Most of all it is possible to concentrate on study
When i was high school student, I studied over 10hours
so i was under a lot of stress
However i could forget about my stress while studying Chinese with my friends and teachers
As a result, i was able to concentrate on study again also i got a good grade in the class
Therefore i agree that~~

이렇게 했는데 둘 다 5점 만점 몇점나올것 같나요??ㅜㅜ 직전시험 150점 이었어요ㅠㅠ