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문제

Some people prefer to work with a group of people. Other people prefer to work by themselves. Which do you prefer and why?

답안1

Most importantly, If work with others, I can meet many people with diverse backgroud. Therefore, I can develop my social skill.

And then, I can ask for help and advice.

So, I can learn from others.

After that, we can divide workload. So It increase productivity.

Finally, It’s more fun.

It is true working alone concentrate on work better. However I still prefer to work with others. It is more convenient.

답안 2 

Most importantly, If work with others, I can meet many people with diverse backgroud. Therefore, I can develop my social skill.

For example when I worked my compamy, I worked with collegues. It’s because I can meet many people.

Personally I’m someone who consider produtivity. If you work with others, you can divide workload. So It increase productivity.