전체평) 가장 관건인 10, 11은 잘 대답함(시간도 적절했고 내용도 괜찮았다생각함. 그러나 약간의 문법 틀림과 약간의 시간 지체 있음),

8번 늦게 대답해서 제대로 정보 못줌. 늦은거에 대한미안함은 표시함. 그리고 말하는 도중 짤림..

5번은 정확히 대답 했는데 시간 모잘라서 약~간짤림.

몇 점 나올까여..

1-2. (상점 디스카운트 홍보/날씨 방송)

무난하게 했음. 아주 극적이게한 거 같진 않음. 몇 단어 콩글리쉬 발음 난 거 같음.

3. (사람 작게 보이는 건물위주 배경사진) 이슬람 국가, 큰 나무가 보이고, 사람들이 다 앉아있다.

it seems like thispicture is taken at some kind of exotic countries, such as Islamic country.first,..(좀 더듬음) what i can seefirst is big and tall trees. .............(약간의 공백) itlooks so exotic. there are a lot of people setting on the chairs, and i can seesome people are setting on the glass. in the back of,(정정) in the back ground of this picture, i can see some small and shortbuilding, it looks apartment.

(=>전체적으로 잘 말했지만 살짝 공백이 있음. 길진 않음. 중간에 주어동사 수일치 안되는 부분 있음..마지막에 아파트먼트짤린거 같기도 하고 ㅠ)

4-6 카메라 관련 질문

4. 카메라/ 마지막으로 산 적

it was a while ago,im not using(현재진행형쓴거 틀린 듯) cameraoften. so it was almost 5years ago, i bought a digital camera, dslr. and it is(수일치틀린듯) expensive 

5. 카메라/ 언제 주로 찍냐

as i told you, imnot familiar with camera things. so I rarely(이거 발음 좀 구렸음 ㅠㅠ) use camera. If i havesome special events such as graduations (하고 시간 모자라서 짤렸음 ㅠ)

6. 카메라/ 친구들과 사진을 share하기에 뭐가 젤 최고의 방법 같냐.

as you already know,nowadays cell-phone is very technological. if you use cell phone, you can sendphotos, and you can share photos through the internet, such as facebook, ortwitters. so i think using cell phone is the best way to sharephotos.  (중간에 셀폰 기능 말할때 좀 버벅거림)

7-9. book conferenceschedule

7. 이벤트 장소, 첫 번째 클래스 시작 시간/

oh hi. the conferencewill be held at ~~~~. and it will be started at 0000. so please come and enjoyour conference.

8. 본인이 어린이 책 하고자 하는데 관련된 컨퍼런스가 있냐 물었음.

(표 숙지 제대로 안되 있어서 공백 거의 8초 이상 되는듯.. 그 담에) sorry for lateresponse, there will not be book.. (하고 짤림)

9. 스페셜 이벤트 있음 자세히 알려달라.

of course. there willbe total 3 special events. first, there will be ~~~ presented by ~~~. afterthat, there will be lunch at ~~~~. lastly , ~~~~. This is our last schedule. Itis about ~~~~~(세부 내용)

10. 시 합창단? 관장?인데광고가 잘못 나갔다. 다음달이 아니라 다음주인데 잘못 나갔어. 어케하면좋겠니?

hi Janet. this isjiyoung, calling back to your message. i understand you have a problem withyour advertising noticing(이거 발음 좀 안좋았음) about your concert. and it is(시제 틀림)misprinted not next week but next month. first of all, im really sorry aboutthis situation... for fixing that, i suggest you to advertise bigger thanbefore, and colored. and i can also upload it on website so that more peopleknow about that. if you have any ideas or dont like this solution, please callme back.

11. 어떤게 해피 라이프를 만드냐? 예시 몇 개 나옴(즐길 수 있는 직장 갖기.애완동물키우기. 취미 갖기)

in this topic, ithink it is better to get an enjoyable job for having a happy life. because iworked at a film making company before, but it was really hard for me becauseyou have no time to time(정정)no time to sleep. even I, (정정) i even didnt eat meal soi felt very bad, but later i changed my job, i worked for an advertisingcompany. after that, i was really satisfied with this job, so everything wentwell. so i think it is good to get an enjoyable job for having a happy life.