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<자기소개>

Hi, nice to meet you.

Let me introduce myself.

My name is Bin-Won but you can call me jacob.

It's a my English name.

Maybe you think other Jacob who was a main character in movie '트와일라잇'.

He has a nice are muscle but I haven't.

I'm 29 years old in korean age.

I'm currently a student and I'm a senior at Hankook University.

My major is business administration.

I chose my major because I would like to have a job in this field.

I want to work for a bank in the near future.

I plan to graduate next year, so I need to study hard to improve my English skill.

There are three people in my family : My father, my mother, and me.

I live with my father in an apartment.

We live in Busan.

My mother live in Masan because she works at Masan.

I don't have any brothers or sisters.

In my free time, I like to read books.

I like novels the best.

Also I enjoy watching movies on weekends.

<쇼핑>

When I need something, I usually visit the 신세계 department store located in 센텀시티 on weekends.

It's a my favorite shopping place.

I like going to there with my girl friend.

The 신세계 department store is the most large department store in the world.

There are many clothes shops, restaurants, and a book shop.

So I often browse through books in the book shop.

The 신세계 department store sells many things.

There are woman clothes shops, masterpiece shops, and cosmetics shops on the first floor.

And there are man's clothes shops on the fifth floor so I usually go to the fifth floor.

I like this place bacause of its stylish clothes and reasonable prices.

Also, most of its clothes fit me very well, so I always go there when I need to buy something new clothes.

I enjoy going to this department store because it's a very covenient shopping place.

It's located near the '센텀시티' subway station so I can be reached  easily by subway.

And I can do many things at once in the 신세계 department store for example buying something or eating foods.