9월6일 10시30분시험

지난시험은 레벨7 170점이었습니다.
레벨8목표예요 ㅠㅠ
밑에 답변말할때 제가 밑에 쓴것과 하나도 다른곳없이,
음..어.. 이런것도 하나도 안쓰고
공부한대로 쭉 얘기했어요.

Part5 (광고를 찍을건데 배우 섭외할지 회사내 사람쓸지 조언부탁)
Hello, this is ~~ returing your call.
I've got your message saying that you are in charge of making new advertisement.
However, you said that there is a problem.
So, you asked me for help.
First of all, i really understand that you may be worried.
Since i got your message, i've been thinking your problem and i am really happy to say that i came up with some solutions.
First of all, why don't you hire the actors?
I think it seems more professional.
Also, we can attract more customers who are fans of the actor.
Moreover, i think it is a good idea to get together after work tomorrow so we can discuss this more in detail.
(Don't worry. Everything will be fine.)
These are my suggestion.
If you have any further questions considering this matter, please feel free to call me back anytime. Thank you.


Part6. (직업을 위해서 인터넷강의를 듣는게 젤 도움이 되는 방법이다)

I think the most important factor (ㅜㅜ떨려서 잘못말했아요 helpful 해야되는데 important 이라구...) is taking the internet lecture when i want to study for a job. Let me give you some details about this.
Actually according to the newspaper i read recently, the amount of people who try to take the internet lecture has increased by 90 percents over the last 5 years.
I think this means that many people know the benefits of the internet lecture.
Also, i believe that with technology advancing at(with으로 전치사 잘못말한거같기도 해요) a fast growing rate, people can take lectures anywhere at anytime with their smart phones.
Moreover, i think people can take lessons at affordable prices.
Therefore, this is the reason why i think internet lecture is the most helpful way to be successful at the job.(이거 아니면 to be study for their jobs. 라고 했을거예요)

ㅜㅜ8 꼭 받아야되는데
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