고수님들 냉정한 평가 부탁드립니다.

파트1.

1번 : 읽고 18초 남음, 몇군데 더듬더듬함, ( ),( ),and( ) 구문 잘했음, 전체적으로 크고 또박또박 읽음

2번 : 읽고 13초 남음, 몇군데 더듬더듬함, ( ),( ),and( ) 구문 잘했음, 전체적으로 크고 또박또박 읽음

파트2.

This picture was taken on the street.

what i notice first is 4 people in this picture.

in the foreground of the picture, there are 2 people.

one of them is woman, she is wearing glassess, and holding glassess.

and wearing black pants. next to her, i can see another woman.

she has ponytail, and is wearing pink cardigun, and carrying side bag.

in the background of the picture, there are 2 people holding hands.

generally, it seems like sunny 에서 끊김 ㅠ

파트3.

1.질문 : 언제마지막으로 헬스장 갔느냐, 얼마나 머물렀느냐

답변 : the last time i went to fitness club was yesterday, i stayed for 3 hours. because i exercised very hard

2.질문 : 새로운 헬스장 생기면 무슨 기구가 있었으면 좋겠느냐, 왜?

답변 : (앞에 문장 그대로 인용) i want running machine. because i want diet for me

3.질문 : 헬스장 탈퇴를 유발하는 가장 큰 이유

답변 : (요금 증가를 꼽음) as i am a student, so i don't have much money. resonable prices is very important to me

that is why, i sellect this option.

파트4.

1.질문 : 프리젠테이션이 언제 어디서 열리냐

답변 : The presentation will be held (날짜), at (호텔) in (방번호). please keep that in mind

2.질문 : 프리젠테이션이 아침에 시작하는걸로 알고있는데 맞냐

답변 : No. you have wrong information, the presentation will be held at (시간) in the afternoon. please keep that in mind

3.질문 : 플라스틱 관련 토픽 이야기해줘

답변 : Of course. there are 2 topics about plastic.

the first is (플라스틱관련토픽1) it will be held at (시간) by (인턴)

secondly (플라스틱관련토픽2) will be given by (인턴) at (시간)

please keep that in mind, thank you.

파트5.

전화내용 : 난 윌리엄이다. 자원자들에게 화장품샘플을 나눠주고 아이디어를 받았는데 개발팀에서 이게 도움이 되지않는다고한다

도와달라.

답변 : (내용을 이해를 잘못해서 자원자 구한다는 내용으로 해석함)

hello 윌리엄, this is john, returning your call

i just listened to your message and understand that, you want to need some information about volunteer.

so you would like for me to check on this matter.

don't worry . after checking into the sichuation, i came up with some following solution.

first of all, why don't you put advertisement to your website? maybe it shoud be helpful.

secondly, it is a good idea to find volunteer directly. maybe it is hard. but it would be good for you.

these are my suggestions. please feel free to contact me if you have any questions. thank you. bye.

파트5.

질문 : 여분의 돈을 쓸수있게된다면 뭐에 쓰고 싶은가?

답변: (more experience 고름)

(앞에 문장 인용) i prefer to spend (더 많은 경험을 위해 쓰고싶다) than others.

there are several reasons to support my opinion.

first of all, i like enjoying new things in my life.

to be specific, there are many things to do in the world. such as work, sports, and other activites and so on.

텀이 약간 있었음 secondly, i spend my money for my life. i love my life 에서 끊김 ㅠ(헛소리함 ㅋㅋ)

말은 최대한 자연스럽게 억양살려서 읽으려 노력했고, 음음 도 최소화 시키고 더듬더듬 약간 거린건 있습니다.

끝나고 들어보니 목소리가 크고 자신감이 있어보이게 들렸습니다.

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