파트1은 첫문제는 무난하게 읽었고요
두번째는 한번 버벅였어요ㅠㅠ

파트2는 회의실 그림인데요
This picture was taken indoors in a meeting room
The first thing i can see is three people sitting around a table . And the man in the middle is using a pen and is looking at some documents
Let me see .. On the right of the picture, i can see the woman using a laptop. On the left , the man is drinking a beverage. In the background, there is some paintings on the wall (여기서 is 문법 실수했어요) . It seems like it is a typical scene at a workplace.

파트3는
어떤 유형의 동네에 살고 있냐? 미래에 이사 갈거냐?이거였나
In a safe neighborhood. 이렇게하고 and will move in the future because it is not convenient.

두번째 문제는
어디에 사는지가 중요하냐?
중요하다고 했고 because i can reach other places easily.라고 덧붙엿어요

세번째 파트3문제는
너 새로운 집살때 뭐 원하니 해서
넓은 큰 부엌 선택했고
Because it is good for cooking many foods
And a large kitchen has good system.
Therefore,하고 똑같은 말 결론으로 지었어요

파트4는 무난하게 한거같고 한번 버벅인거같아요

파트5는 커피샾에 사람들이 스낵하고 커피만사고 간다 오래 머물게 하는 방법있을까 이거같은데 이렇게햇어요..

Hello 브랜다 this is jack , the manager of the coffee shop.
I just got your massage saying that you have a problem with your coffee shop.
So, you want some advice on how to overcome this problem.
After looking into the situation, i came up with some solutions.
First, why don't you offer a special discount for customers for a month?
It will attract many customers who thought the price was too expensive
Or , you can use SNS to promote the coffee shop because it can reach a lot of people quickly and advertising through SNS doesn't cost a thing.
I hope that you will be satisfied with these solutions.
Anyway , if you have any more questions, give me a call and have a nice day . Bye . Good bye
정확히 이렇게 얘기했고요
끝긴건 없고 제일 잘한거같은데 좀 해결책이 ..음

파트6은 높은봉급주는회사에서 일한다햇어요
I would rather work at a company that offers a higher salary for some reasons
Firstly, a higher salary is the best way to motivate me.
예시는 못햇네요...
Secondly, with the development with medical technology, these days, many people are living longer than before , so they need enough money to live a satisfactory life in the future.
And according to recent studies, the number of people who prefer work at a company that offers a higher salary has been increasing.
(Prefer work 저거 문법 실수인가요?)
For these reasons, i would ~~~~~~

파트1에서 한번 버벅거렸고 spokesperson을 spokesman이라고 얘기햇어요..

파트2에서는 느릿느릿 그냥 얘기한거같아요 .

파트3에서 약간 버벅....
파트 6에서는 버벅 거린거 있습니다.
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점수 얼마나 나올까요 저번보다 발전햇으면..