지난주 일요일 시험에 사진묘사 문제에 이런식으로 답한 기억이 납니다.

This is a picture taken at a restuarant.

There are several people in this picture.

In the middle of the picture, there are four peple

They are sittting around a table under the parasol.

One of them is  taking a note a piece of paper.

One of them is wearing a blue shirt and using a laptop computer.

One of them is a wearing a dress and looking at a smartphone's sreen.

One of them is looking at something.  

On the left side of the picture, there are three peple.

It seems like that they are having a conversation.

In the background of the picture, there is a white building.

From this picture, I can tell it is a sunny day.  

Maybe, they are having a good time at the restaurant.

동사 sit,  take, use, wear, look, seem, tell, note, have 를 썼습니다.

파트6는 동료가 배우는데 좋냐 메니저가 좋냐 중에 택일 문제였던 것으로 기억됩니다.

I think that a coworker is the best source for learning.

There are several reasons to support my opinion.

Most of all, when I had a hard time, it was very helpful for me.

For example, when I became a senior college, I thought about choosing my job.

So I participated in an internship program.

About six years ago, I worked at ample company.

At first, I didn't know what to do, how to do.

At that time, my coworker name is gang.

When I faced a diffculties in the business process. he gave me some useful tips and recommendations.

He taught me meticulously how to make a business report.

He taught me how to give a good presentation with other people.

He had a good personality and positive attitude, he was good for me.

Thanks to his help, I received a good reputation for the department manager.

This is the reason why I think so.

파트 6는 퍼스트, 세컨드도 좋지만 많은 문장을 만들려면 예시로 하는 것이 좋습니다.

예전에 150을 받을때는 시간을 채워서 말하려고 했으나 약간의 정적이 있었습니다.

명사만 다양하게 쓰고 동사를 많이 쓰지 않았습니다만 동사를 다양하게 쓰니 180까지 점수가 나오더군요. 

문제는 항상 자신이 나올만한 문제들을 만들어서 중얼중얼 연습해 보는 것이지요. 문장을 만들어서 말하다 보면 자연스럽게

나옵니다.

참가하다라는 말을 파트4에서 자주 나옵니다만  한번은 take part in 한번은 participate in으로 같은 말도 자꾸 다른 말로 바꿔서

대답하는 것이 점수향상에 도움이 되더군요.

190이나 200은 문장구성 뿐만 아니라 발음도 좋아야 하기 때문에 거기는 제가 말씀드릴 부분이 없을 것 같네요. 토종 국내파에

40대 아저씨라 발음은 좋지 않습니다.