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I agree that internet advertising is the most effective way to reach my target customer

There are several reasons to support my opinion

Most of all many people use the internet nowadays

From wake up to sleep we never let cellphone go

And someone want to buy the clothes he will search the internet at first

Because internet is the best way to get information about everything

So we can compare the price.quality. and we can see the many reviews

It is helpful to decide my decision

This is the reason why i think internet advertising is the most effective way to reach my target customer



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