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[Question]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Playing a game is fun only when you win.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Many people say that only winning is fun while playing a game. But for me, winning is not a big deal. I think that beyond winning, we can learn some lessons even though we lose the game; Learn teamworks, and be mature.

To start with, while playing a game with friends or families, we realize how important teamwork is. Many experts involved in psychology say that many children can be. For example, when I was in elementary school, my teacher really liked to play school. whenever we had a spare time, he pushed us to play soccer. Before playing the game, he always said: Don’t be selfish and always think about how to pass to your teammates. At the first time, I didn’t know why he is saying like that, but after a few games, I figured out that pass is not only the fastest way to win the game, but also the fastest way to build friendship. Therefore, until now, I am a big team player whatever I do right now. 

In addition, we can be more mature than before; For instance, When I was in college, Me and my classmates often play baseball with other major students. To be totally honest, my friends were really not talented and nine of ten times, we mostly lost. I was terrified and frustrated because I was the key player and I thought everyone except for me is not doing their best. But I realized I was totally wrong. Even if they not played well, they throwing their bodies to catch the ball and dirt was all over their bodies. I was insane and immature. After that moment, I never ignored them and tried to encourage them.

To sum up, although we lose the game, we can have amazing experiences. Especially, recognize the meaning of teamworks and be more a thoughtful person. As a result, our life can be fantastic when we learn this. As an old saying that goes “life can’t be alone”