I think exercising outdoor outdoors is better than exercising in a gym with equipment for several reasons.

The first reason is that exercising outdoors is cheaper than exercising in a gym.

Nowadays, the gyms is are so expensive. So I'm a college student, and I live on a tight budget,

I cannot do not have enough money to spend on the gym.[또는 I cannot afford to pay for the gym] The second reasons is that, exercising outdoor outdoors helps me relieve my stress. For example, when I go outside and exercising exercise, um I feel like, um, stress out I can blow off the steam/I can release my stress. so I think exercising outdoor outdoors is better than exercising in a gym with equipment.

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