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- 2024.02.02
유형1 자기소개하기
My name is Younha Lee. I am 25 years old. I live in an apartment in Seoul with my parents.
I’m currently a senior majoring in French. I chose this major because I love French culture and literature of France.
Unfortunately, I haven’t been able to visit visited France yet because of COVID-19.
-> 방문할 수 없었던 상황이기 때문에 문장을 조금 바꾸시는 것이 좋을 것 같습니다.
If I have a chance, I would definitely like to visit.
-> 끝맺는 문장이 필요할 것 같아 추가했습니다.
My hobby hobbies these is days include playing tennis.
I generally prefer outdoor activities that I can do with my friends.
When it comes to personality, I’m a kind of extroverted person extrovert, So I love spending time with my friends.
It is a great way to refresh myself.
-> 문장의 흐름상 위치를 바꾸는 것이 좋을 것 같습니다.
Someday, I hope to work for a big consulting company firm.
So I applied for an internship as a consultant and got accepted, so I’m going to work from this summer.
-> 조금 더 구체적인 설명이 필요할 것 같아 내용을 추가했습니다.
I’m looking forward to it. starting an internship as a consultant this summer.
유형2 대상 설명하기[1]-인물
My best friend’s name is Yonghee Hong and I’ve known her since we were 20 years old.
I met her for the first time in my college dormitory. a dorm in college.
We have been best buddies ever since the first time we met.
She’s majoring in fashion, so she dresses very well. ’s a nice dresser.
Regarding her In terms of appearance, she’s got big eyes and long black hair.
She’s quite tall. When she wears high heels, she looks like a fancy model.
As for her personality, she’s pretty sociable and open-minded.
She has many friends and acquaintances and loves spending time with them.
We always hang out with each other all the time. We are also planning a trip to to travel France this summer.
My favorite thing is her thoughtful personality. What I like the most about her is her pleasant nature. (친절한 성격)
When I face a problem, she always tells says me that I have great potential and gives me courage. shows faith in me.
It makes me feel I can do everything. I am very grateful for that.
유형3 대상 설명하기[2]-장소
The place where I live is a small apartment in Seoul. The location of my house is very unique.
There are lots of fancy restaurants and bakeries near my place and there is a park about ten minutes away on foot.
Actually, it is a typical one-room studio. It has a private bathroom, and there is a small kitchen area at one end of the room.
There is a partition in the middle of the room. It has been installed I installed it to separate my the sleeping area and dining area.
And It has a large window in the middle of the room. So, a lot of sunlight comes through the window during the day.
it lets a lot of light in during the day time.
This is the first apartment I’ve been living in since I became independent had since I moved out of my parents’ house.
The place is a little bit smaller than I expected. would’ve liked, but it’s really cozy.
Above all, it is located 10 minutes away from my school.
That’s what makes my apartment so attractive.
-> 전반적으로 질문에 대한 답변을 잘 적어주셨습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
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