i usually go camping with my family. The first thing i do is to pitch a tent.i have learned how to pitch a tent in the past through military life.so I can easily pitch a tent by myself. and then, I prepare very delicious and healthy food for my family members. I have learned how to cook healthy food. so i can serve them good food. lastly, In my leisure time, I always enjoy the guita. i am very good at playing the guitar. because i has been learning guitar for ten years. when I play the guitar. i can see my family members dance to guitar music.

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Have you ever been to Africa?

Moreover, many places in Africa were not connected to the electricity.

also. they had big and small wounds in their bodies. but they could not get treatment because there was no medical facility in the vicinity. 

I couldn't believe their hard life.

I really wanted to help them. so I decided to send them financial support. i now sponsor 5 children around the world.

It is very meaningful.

전체적으로 시제나, 문장, 어색한 부분좀 봐주셨으면 좋겠습니다.

항상 수고하시고. 감사드립니다