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Q3. Please tell me about the most memorable movie you have seen. What was the movie about? Who was in it? Why was it memorable? [기억에 남는 경험 -영화]

The most memorable movie I have ever seen is the About time. 

This movie was released in 2013, and it is about family, love, time, and life.

The story is briefly this: One day, Tim heard his ability which can travel back in time from his father. After that, Tim has used his ability to fix his mistakes. Coincidentally, he met Mary at the blind date, and fell in love with her. However, he realized that he can’t change everything by his power. He finally stopped using his ability, and started to enjoy every single moment.

This movie was unforgettable for me because it gave me a big lesson. 

Before this movie, I thought if I could travel back in time, I would do everything I want. 

But, this movie made me think again about my life and time. 

Now, I know I don’t need the ability to travel in time. I learned the life lesson that I should enjoy every second of my life. 

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