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- 2017.03.23
첨삭 혹은 고득점을 위해 수정해야할 부분 말씀 좀 해주세요~
Hi! My name is ○○○, and I am from Seoul, born and raised. I just moved the city named Seongnam. I work in the sales department at a manufacturing company. I just joined this company, so I am pretty new to this company and I like it so far.
I am 30 years old and I have a younger brother, mother and father. We are living together at an apartment.
I like to surf online, play tennis and spend time with my friends on weekend. Actually I like having some drink with my friends or colleagues. Talking and laughing in a drinking party makes me happy Also it makes us understand each other more than before.
Even though I’m a Korean, but I studied at China since I was 15years old. So I’m familiar with Chinese people and their culture. In this reason, I’m in charge of China market sales in my job. For now, job should always come first because it is closely related with my future career.
번호 | 제목 | 글쓴이 | 조회수 | 날짜 |
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1971 | [스피킹] [토익스피킹] 첨삭[음성파일첨부] 요청드립니다. [97번 봣는데 레벨7이... [8] | borkim | 2200 | 2017.05.04 |
1970 | [스피킹] 한문제 해봤는데 첨삭 부탁드려요 [3] | gusghd0216 | 1553 | 2017.05.04 |
1969 | [OPIc] 빠른 첨삭부탁드립니다 [2] | Kim | 1475 | 2017.04.26 |
1968 | [OPIc] 첨삭부탁드려요! (자기소개) [2] | keem | 1520 | 2017.04.25 |
1967 | [OPIc] [무료] 고득점을 위한 실전 토스&오픽 무료 해설강의 [33] | 해토지기 | 16971 | 2017.04.23 |
1966 | [OPIc] [OPIC] 자기소개 첨삭 부탁드립니다! [1] | 빡군 | 1871 | 2017.04.23 |
1965 | [OPIc] 자기소개 첨삭부탁드립니다 [1] | hercules63 | 1507 | 2017.04.21 |
1964 | [OPIc] 첨삭부탁드려요 [2] | kwondh90 | 1777 | 2017.03.28 |
1963 | [OPIc] 첨삭 부탁드립니다! [3] | Kim | 1836 | 2017.03.27 |
1962 | [OPIc] 해커스 오픽 Advanced <Unit5 사는 곳> [1] | 파퀴아오 | 1876 | 2017.03.26 |
1961 | [OPIc] 자기소개 첨삭 부탁드리겠습니다~ [1] | kurukuru | 1718 | 2017.03.26 |
>> | [OPIc] 자기소개 첨삭 [1] | mimomimo | 1707 | 2017.03.23 |
1959 | [OPIc] 첨삭 부탁드려요!! [1] | ooo | 1662 | 2017.03.07 |
1958 | [OPIc] 오픽스크립트 첨삭부탁드립니다. 감사합니다!! [1] | 최지운 | 3168 | 2017.03.07 |
1957 | [OPIc] 오픽 자기소개 첨삭 부탁드립니당~ [1] | 또또이 | 1645 | 2017.03.04 |
1956 | [OPIc] 첨삭해주세요 [1] | Jerry | 1647 | 2017.03.03 |
1955 | [OPIc] 첨삭부탁드려요 [1] | weee | 1622 | 2017.03.02 |
1954 | [스피킹] part 1 점검해주세요 ㅠㅠ [1] | 토스초보 | 1877 | 2017.02.28 |
1953 | [OPIc] 첨삭부탁드립니다. [1] | semimmm | 1664 | 2017.02.27 |
1952 | [OPIc] 첨삭부탁드립니다~ [2] | Jerry | 1717 | 2017.02.25 |
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