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- 2017.03.07
My name is Jiwun choi. But you can just calI me Melanie. It's my English name. um.. I am in my mid twenties. I live in an house in Suwon with my parents and a younger brother.
These days I’m looking for a job in the field of trading. I ‘d like to work in this field, because my major is Chinese language and since Korea has a lot of trading business with China, I thought that it will be much easier for me to get a job in this field( in the trading field.)
In my free time, I (usually) go traveling.I like traveling, because they let me experience new things and new culture.
As for my personality, I am tend to be outgoing. I prefer nanging out with my friends rather than reading books at home alone.
I’d really like to work for a big trading company. Now that my univeristiy education is finished, I am looking forward to getting my first job. I really want to earn some money by myself and become a real adult.
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The place where I live is an apartment in the downtown area. the location is very convenient. the subway station is not too far from my place and there are many direct buses to Gangnam station. So getting around is a piece of cake.
yeah that was about the location.
(and from now on)let me tell you about the apartment itself!
At first glance, it looks like a pretty typical apartment. However, what sets my apartment apart from the others is the veranda. The veranda surrounds the living room, So when I sit in the sofa, It feels like as if I am surrounded by sky and the view is amazing. I love my living room! I love my apartment!
But the only issue I have with my apartment(living room) is that sometimes it becomes very dangerous. One day if a big storm comes, the glass wall would be very vulnerable to cracks. I am really worried about it.
번호 | 제목 | 글쓴이 | 조회수 | 날짜 |
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1971 | [스피킹] [토익스피킹] 첨삭[음성파일첨부] 요청드립니다. [97번 봣는데 레벨7이... [8] | borkim | 2200 | 2017.05.04 |
1970 | [스피킹] 한문제 해봤는데 첨삭 부탁드려요 [3] | gusghd0216 | 1553 | 2017.05.04 |
1969 | [OPIc] 빠른 첨삭부탁드립니다 [2] | Kim | 1475 | 2017.04.26 |
1968 | [OPIc] 첨삭부탁드려요! (자기소개) [2] | keem | 1520 | 2017.04.25 |
1967 | [OPIc] [무료] 고득점을 위한 실전 토스&오픽 무료 해설강의 [33] | 해토지기 | 16971 | 2017.04.23 |
1966 | [OPIc] [OPIC] 자기소개 첨삭 부탁드립니다! [1] | 빡군 | 1871 | 2017.04.23 |
1965 | [OPIc] 자기소개 첨삭부탁드립니다 [1] | hercules63 | 1507 | 2017.04.21 |
1964 | [OPIc] 첨삭부탁드려요 [2] | kwondh90 | 1777 | 2017.03.28 |
1963 | [OPIc] 첨삭 부탁드립니다! [3] | Kim | 1836 | 2017.03.27 |
1962 | [OPIc] 해커스 오픽 Advanced <Unit5 사는 곳> [1] | 파퀴아오 | 1876 | 2017.03.26 |
1961 | [OPIc] 자기소개 첨삭 부탁드리겠습니다~ [1] | kurukuru | 1718 | 2017.03.26 |
1960 | [OPIc] 자기소개 첨삭 [1] | mimomimo | 1707 | 2017.03.23 |
1959 | [OPIc] 첨삭 부탁드려요!! [1] | ooo | 1662 | 2017.03.07 |
>> | [OPIc] 오픽스크립트 첨삭부탁드립니다. 감사합니다!! [1] | 최지운 | 3168 | 2017.03.07 |
1957 | [OPIc] 오픽 자기소개 첨삭 부탁드립니당~ [1] | 또또이 | 1645 | 2017.03.04 |
1956 | [OPIc] 첨삭해주세요 [1] | Jerry | 1647 | 2017.03.03 |
1955 | [OPIc] 첨삭부탁드려요 [1] | weee | 1622 | 2017.03.02 |
1954 | [스피킹] part 1 점검해주세요 ㅠㅠ [1] | 토스초보 | 1877 | 2017.02.28 |
1953 | [OPIc] 첨삭부탁드립니다. [1] | semimmm | 1664 | 2017.02.27 |
1952 | [OPIc] 첨삭부탁드립니다~ [2] | Jerry | 1717 | 2017.02.25 |
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