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- 2024.10.19
Q3 This picture was taken in front of the train. And she is wearing a headphones, ahd holding an umbrella, umbrlleae
First, I can see three people are walking along down the street
in the middle of the picture.
in the middle of the picture.
And, I can see a woman who has with curly hair.
In front of her, there is another woman who is wearing jeans and she is wearing a handbag. handback
And she is holding a smartphone.
On the right side of the picture, some people are getting on the train.
overall,
Firstly, First, I can see two people are talking to each other.There is A man with a who has mustache and he is holding a cup.
Q4 This picture was taken in an office.
In front of him, there is a woman who is wearing jeans and she is holding documents and a cup with the documents.
On the table, there is a laptop computer and , some office materials and plants.
Overall, overal it looks peaceful.
-> 사소한 실수가 많아 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
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