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Hello! my nameis changhoon and i am 31 years old.

but, many foreign friends called me wandaboy. this is because i lived rwanda for 2 yeras.

i am currently a senioe at woosong university.

my major is rail road civil engineering, but i am not interest in my major.

so i have worked at KOICA for 2 years.

i live with my parents in Daejeon.

There are people in my family : father,mother,sister,sister's husband and me

I think i am an outdoor and strong person.

in my free time, i like to ride a bicycle, i also enjoy taking picture on weekend.

 

이렇게 모든 패턴을 넣어 작성했습니다.

 

틀린곳 수정과 이것을 말했을때의 감점부분은 어떤가요?

 

enjoy taking picture가 맞는 표현인가요?맞다면 왜그런지 알고 싶습니다