First, I can see three people are walking along down the street
in the middle of the picture. 

And, I can see a woman who has with curly hair. 

And she is wearing a headphones, ahd holding an umbrella, umbrlleae 

In front of her, there is another woman who is wearing jeans and she is wearing a handbag. handback 

And she is holding a smartphone. 

On the right side of the picture, some people are getting on the train.
overall, 

-> 사소한 실수가 많아 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.