This picture was taken at school.

Firstly First, I can see some people are walking down the street.

On both sides of the picture, In the middle I can see two men are sitting on the each bench.

There are grasses in the middle of the picture, and several trees on both sides. I can see some ground.

And the both side of the picture there are some trees.

In the background, there is a big large building that looks like a school.

Overall, it looks like peaceful.

-> 주어진 그림에 대해 구체적으로 잘 묘사해 주셨습니다. 

하지만 사소한 실수가 많아 수정일 필요했습니다. 

조금 더 완벽한 문장을 만드신다면 좋은 점수를 받으실 수 있을 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.