아이들은 긴 시간 휴식 시간을 가지는게 좋다
these days they don't have time to reduce their stress
to be specific they want to have long break time such as visiting different countries
it will be lead to student growth

second these days they are immature and out of control
to be specific they dont know the importance of break
and they don't know what is right and what is wrong
so it will be neccesary for children
so i think 아이들은 긴 시간 휴식 시간 가지는게 좋다

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