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- 2024.07.13




[자주 가는 공원 설명]: Living in Seoul, I feel very lucky to have the Hanriver Park nearby.
It runs along the Han River, which divides Seoul into north and south.
Fortunately for me, it is located within walking distance of my home.
I go there at least once a week, and often a lot more.
The Han River Park has some great facilities.
There are biking trails throughout the park, and several places have bikes for rent.
If you don’t like biking, there are lots of other activities to do, such as playing badminton, walking the dog like this.
In my opinion, this is an excellent place to have a picnic, read a book, or just go for a stroll.
[공원에서 하는 활동]: There are quite a few great parks in my city.
An especially nice one is just ten minutes from where i live, so i go there at least once a week.
The main activity I do at the park is running. The park is great for that because it has a dedicated running path,
so I don’t have to share the track with cyclists or pedestrians.
My typical routine consists of running five or six kilometers, and if I happen to have enough energy.
I’ll do some exercises on the workout machines they have there.
I love my workouts at the park because I always feel great afterwards.
I’d much rather be out in nature than stuck inside a gym.
[공원에서 일어난 기억에 남는 일/경험]: I ran into my ex-boyfriend at the park.
We used to go to this parkwhen we were together and there was a bench we always used to sit down.
Anyway, after our broke up, I headed to the bench to bring back memories. But I was completely surprised.
It was because my ex-boyfriend was sitting there with a new girl, maybe his new girl friend.
Isn’t it annoying? Even worse, I went there without makeup and I was wearing sweatsuits.
I pretended not to notice him and ran away quickly.
[이슈]: It's the trash problem. People throw the trash anywhere in the park.
Also, there are people who take a walk with their dogs.
There are cases where a dog owner leaves the trash that he or she has cleaned up. So sometimes I step in dog poop.
In order to solve the park's trash problem, install more trash can. Also, give notice about the trash problem often.
[공원 비교]: The Han River is the most famous park in Korea because it is located in Seoul.
The Han River has a beautiful view because it has a park and a pretty river.
Also, there is bike renting service and do various activities. But it is famous and crowded with people.
There is also a park in Suwon, which has a beautiful view similar to the Han River.
The difference from the Han River is that it is not crowded because there are few people.
But it is very far from my house.
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