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- 2024.04.23




선생님 ih 목표로 공부중입니다. 첨삭 부탁 드려요!
my childhood neighborhood is always comfortable and nice because my beloved family lives there and I have childhood memories.
Q10. activities that you enjoy doing in your neighborhood
Well,,,I usually go to the park with my friends. I talk with my friends while eating some foods on the lawn, and take pictures, look at the scenery of park or while listening to music I take a walk or take a nap. and sometimes watch busking.
Q6. What I do before and after watching a movie
I go to the bathroom before watching a movie. Because when I go to the bathroom in the middle of watching a movie, my immersion is broken and I don’t want to be bothered. And one more thing,, I buy snacks such as popcorn, nachos, squid, and coke and wait. After I finish watching the movie, I throw away the trash and go to the bathroom right away.
Q7. one's favorite movie theater
I used to watch the movie Avatar in 3D, and when I went to Disneyland before, I had a 4D video experience and it was so fun and immersive. The chair moved, the wind and water came out. It felt like I was in the video. I want to go to the 4D movie theater or IMAX movie theater later. I haven't been there yet. But, I think it's more immersive and fun than 3D.
It's short sleeves on top and long pants on bottom.
Q4. my first experience on a trip-경험배점높음
My first destination was Jeju Island. I lived in mountain village, so I had to leave the village to find a beach. Personally, I prefer the beaches of jeju island. The sea water was emerald green and crystal clear. There were dark gray rocks on the shallow sea side, and they were in good harmony well with the sea. The wind blews hard, so ruined my hairstyle. But as soon as looking at the emerald green ocean, I felt refreshing and healing. And there were many pretty cafes around. I drank coffee and took many pretty pictures while looking at the beach. The beaches of jeju island are the prettiest beaches in Korea, and definitely my favorite.
my childhood neighborhood is always comfortable and nice because my beloved family lives there and I have childhood memories.
Q10. activities that you enjoy doing in your neighborhood
Well,,,I usually go to the park with my friends. I talk with my friends while eating some foods on the lawn, and take pictures, look at the scenery of park or while listening to music I take a walk or take a nap. and sometimes watch busking.
Q6. What I do before and after watching a movie
I go to the bathroom before watching a movie. Because when I go to the bathroom in the middle of watching a movie, my immersion is broken and I don’t want to be bothered. And one more thing,, I buy snacks such as popcorn, nachos, squid, and coke and wait. After I finish watching the movie, I throw away the trash and go to the bathroom right away.
Q7. one's favorite movie theater
I used to watch the movie Avatar in 3D, and when I went to Disneyland before, I had a 4D video experience and it was so fun and immersive. The chair moved, the wind and water came out. It felt like I was in the video. I want to go to the 4D movie theater or IMAX movie theater later. I haven't been there yet. But, I think it's more immersive and fun than 3D.
It's short sleeves on top and long pants on bottom.
Q4. my first experience on a trip-경험배점높음
My first destination was Jeju Island. I lived in mountain village, so I had to leave the village to find a beach. Personally, I prefer the beaches of jeju island. The sea water was emerald green and crystal clear. There were dark gray rocks on the shallow sea side, and they were in good harmony well with the sea. The wind blews hard, so ruined my hairstyle. But as soon as looking at the emerald green ocean, I felt refreshing and healing. And there were many pretty cafes around. I drank coffee and took many pretty pictures while looking at the beach. The beaches of jeju island are the prettiest beaches in Korea, and definitely my favorite.
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