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보내주신 파일을 여는 방법을 찾아, 빨간 부분에 대한 답변드립니다. 첨삭해야 할 양이 많아 답변이 늦어졌습니다, 죄송합니다.
잘 작성해 주셨지만 다소 어색한 부분에 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.


And one more thing, there is a window right next to the bed, so i can see the sky.


And one more thing, there is a window on the right side of the bed, So I can see the sky.




The home was where I lived when I studied abroad in Shanghai, and it was very different from where I live now. The home I lived in at the time was a small, old apartment with a bedroom, living room, kitchen, and bathroom. The bedroom had large windows that let in lots of sunlight and an indoor balcony. There was a cat tower on the balcony and the cat liked to watch birds outside the window from the cat tower.


The house was where I lived when I studied abroad in Shanghai, but it was very different from where I live now. At the time, the house I lived in was a small, old apartment with a bedroom, a living room, a kitchen, and a bathroom. The bedroom had a large sunny window and an indoor balcony. The house had a cat top, and she loved looking out the window at birds 




This house is about 28 years old, and it has a better interior than a Shanghai house and an outdoor balcony, so I'm growing plants on the balcony. On the minus side, my home is the countryside, so there are not many places to play.


This house is about 28 years old, and the interior is better than a Shanghai house. I have an outdoor balcony, so I'm growing plants there. The downside is that my house is rural, so there aren't many places to play.




Originally, there were no bugs in this house, but when I lived in Seongnam studio apartment in the past, the bug that was there moved. I bought a bug trap and made the room dry and cleaned hard, but the silverfish kept coming out, so I was really stressed. Later on YouTube, told me that I had to spray pesticides, so I sprayed pesticides in gaps on the floor and under furniture, and I couldn't see them well. I sprayed pesticides every time I saw a few later, now almost couldn't see them. I realized from that experience that From this experience, I realized from that experience that silverfish like dark and humid, that their habitat is a gap in the floor, and that pesticides are the best for getting rid of bugs.


Originally, there were no bugs in this house, but when I lived in a studio apartment in Seongnam, they moved in. I bought a bug trap, dried the room, and cleaned it hard, but it kept coming out, so I was stressed out. YouTube told me I needed to spray it, so I sprayed it on the cracks under the floor and furniture, but it worked. After that, I couldn't see it very well. I sprayed it every time I saw it a few times later, and now I can barely find it. From that experience, I realized that I like to be a bit dark and humid, and that my habitat is a crevice on the floor, and pesticides are the best at getting rid of bugs.




It was also the place where the 2018 Pyeongchang Winter Olympics were held. As it is a countryside, there are many mountains, valleys, and fields Cafes with a nice atmosphere around it. There are not many buildings. There are restaurants and shops, but there are not many franchises. My neighborhood is quiet and not many people. It's a good neighborhood, but it's a little uncomfortable that food delivery and public transportation are not developed like a city. However, this neighborhood is always comfortable and good because my beloved family lives there and I have memories of my childhood.


It was also where the 2018 Pyeongchang Winter Olympics were held. As it is a countryside, there are many mountains, valleys, and fields. There are not many buildings, but there are many cafes with a nice atmosphere around. There are restaurants and shops, but not many franchises. My neighborhood is quiet and not many people. It is a nice neighborhood, but it is a little uncomfortable because food delivery and public transportation are not developed like the city. However, this neighborhood is always comfortable and nice because my beloved family lives there and I have childhood memories.




A foreigner and a couple live under my house. Actually, I'm not very close to my neighbors. I rarely see them and I don't know their appearance. One time, while I was going home, three foreigners greeted me first, so I said hello. They seemed like kind people. The lady downstairs feeds the street cats every day. I think she really loves cats. I also like cats, so I feel grateful to her.


There is a foreigner and a couple living below my house. Actually, I am not very close to my neighbors. I rarely see them and don't know what they look like. Once, while I was going home, a foreigner living downstairs greeted me first and said hello. They seemed to be kind people. The woman downstairs feeds the street cats every day. I think she really loves cats. I also like cats, so I feel grateful for her.




Recently, while I was taking a walk in the evening, a brown street cat came to me and rubbed it and lied down, acting cute and purr. It was so pretty that I bought him a churu, and he was asking for more. I saw such a cute street cat for the second time. Usually, street cat runs away or is not allowed to touch it, but this cat was like a dog. There was a box and cat food in front of the restaurant, so I thought that the owner of the restaurant was taking care of him. The cat was so pretty that I sometimes went to pet it and gave churu to him. I went to see the cat again later, but I was worried that the cat was gone because there was only a bowl. The next day, I called the restaurant, I was so glad to hear that, but I also miss the cat.


Recently, when I was taking a walk in the evening, a brown stray cat came and rubbed me, lied down, acted cute, and green. I bought Chuu because it was so pretty, but he asked for more. I saw a cute stray cat like this for the second time. Usually, stray cats run away or are not allowed to touch them, but this cat was like a dog. There were boxes and cat food in front of the restaurant, so I thought the owner was taking care of them. The cat was so pretty that I went to pet it and gave Chuu. Later, I went to see the cat again, but I was worried that the cat was gone because there were only plates. The next day, I called the restaurant and I was so happy to hear that, but I also want to see the cat.




I like thriller, zombie and fantasy movies. The tings about these films that attracts me is that they are highly suspenseful. Thriller and zombie movies are fun to watch while your heart is tense. In addition, in fantasy and zombie movies, special effects and special makeup make the movie more immersive. In my option, these films are the perfect type of movie for killing time. When I'm bored at home, time flies when I watch movies like this.


I like thrillers, zombies, and fantasy movies. The charm of these movies is that they are very tense. Thriller and zombie movies are fun to watch when your heart is nervous. In addition, in fantasy and zombie movies, special effects and special makeup increase the immersion of the movies. In my opinion, these movies are perfect for killing time. Time flies when I watch these movies when I am bored at home.




Actually, I don't really have a favorite movie star right now. When I was in high school, I watched the movie Titanic and liked Leonardo DiCaprio. I was fascinated by DiCaprio's face after watching the movie for the first time in school. How can a person be so handsome and smile so pretty. After the movie was over, I searched DiCaprio on the Internet and was surprised once again. DiCaprio in the picture of the latest article looks like an old man with a big belly and a bushy beard. Although his appearance has changed a lot, I think he is a great actor who is really outstanding for his acting skills.


Actually, I don't have a favorite movie star right now. When I was in high school, I liked Leonardo DiCaprio after watching the movie Titanic. I was fascinated by DiCaprio's face after watching the movie for the first time in school. How can a person smile so handsome and pretty? I was surprised again when I searched DiCaprio on the Internet after the movie was over. DiCaprio in the picture of a recent article looks like an old man with a big belly and a shaggy beard. Although his appearance has changed a lot, I think he is still a great actor with really excellent acting skills.




I like the movie directed by Hayao Miyazaki, and among them, I like the movie “spirited away” the most. When I was in elementary school, I watched this movie at my friend's house as a birthday party. I really like this movie, so I watched it again and again even after growing up. This movie is an animation and fantasy genre. The movie is about Chihiro going to the world of the gods when she passes through a suspicious tunnel on the day she moved with her family, and her parents become pigs after eating the food of the gods, and Chihiro goes on a witch Yubaba mission to save her parents and return to the human world. There are also episodes with various monsters while carrying out the mission, and a boy named Haku helps Chihiro. When I watched the movie, I was really immersed in it like I became Chihiro. It's really interesting when Chihiro does the mission, and it's a movie that's heartbreaking and lingering in the scene where he breaks up with Haku at the end.

 

I like the movie directed by Hayao Miyazaki, and among them, I like the movie 'spirited away' the most. I watched this movie at my friend's house as a birthday party when I was in elementary school. I really like this movie, so I kept watching it even when I grew up. This movie is an animation and fantasy genre. The movie goes to the world of gods as Chihiro passes through a suspicious tunnel on the day he moves in with his family, and his parents eat the food of the gods and become pigs. There is also an episode with various monsters while carrying out the mission, and a boy named Haku helps Chihiro. When I watched the movie, I was really immersed in it as if I became Chihiro. It is really fascinating when Chihiro carries out the mission, and it is a movie that feels heartbreaking and lingering in the scene where he breaks up with Haku at the end.




When I was young, I liked watching horror movies with my friends. I couldn't watch it alone, I had to watch it with my friend, but the nervous and chilling feeling was the charm of horror movies. But now, I don't really like horror movies. When I was in high school, I watched a movie called "orphan", It's about an adopted girl committing murder. After watching the movie, I felt really bad. After that, I don't watch horror movies, but I came to appreciate thriller, zombie, fantasy, and animation. Movies of this genre don't feel bad even after watching a movie and are perfect for killing time.


When I was young, I loved watching horror movies with my friends. I couldn't watch it alone, and I had to watch it with my friends, but the nervous and chilling feeling was the charm of horror movies. But now I don't really like horror movies. In high school, I watched a movie called ‘Orphan’, about an adopted girl who commits a murder. After watching the movie, I felt really bad. After that, I don't really watch horror movies, but I got to watch thrillers, zombies, fantasy, and animation. This genre of movie doesn't hurt my feelings after watching the movie, and it's perfect for killing time.




I like the Han River Park in Seoul. The park runs along a han river. There are trees every where you look. There’s grassy area where you can have a picnic. You can order chicken and ramen while looking at the Han River, take a walk, ride a bike on the bike trails, or ride a kickboard. The park is very crowded on weekends. Also, there are people busking in the evening, so you can listen to songs. I go there once in spring or fall. I get rid of my stress by chatting with my friends while eating delicious food or riding a kickboard while watching the scenery of the Han River.


I like the Han River Park in Seoul. The park runs along the Han River. There are trees everywhere you look. There is a grassy area where you can go on a picnic. You can order chicken and ramen while looking at the Han River, take a walk, ride a bike on a bike trail, or ride a kickboard. The park is very crowded on weekends. There are also people who busk in the evening, so you can listen to songs. I go there once in spring or fall. I relieve my stress by chatting with my friends while eating delicious food, or riding a kickboard while watching the scenery of the Han River.




I remember the first time I went to the Han River Park with my friends when I was in college. During the day, I talked with my friends while eating chicken and ramen on the lawn, While looking at the scenery of Han River, we rode an electric kickboard, took pictures, and watched busking in the evening. Overall, it was a very healing and pleasant experience. I want to go to the Han River Park again.


I remember the first time I went to the Han River Park with my friends when I was in college. During the day, I talked with my friends while eating chicken and ramen on the lawn, and in the evening, I rode an electric kickboard to take pictures and watch busking while looking at the scenery of the Han River. Overall, it was a very healing and enjoyable experience. I want to go to the Han River Park again.




I typically go to the Han River Park with my friends. I talk with my friends while eating chicken and ramen on the lawn, take pictures, While looking at the scenery of Han River, i ride an electric kickboard, I Feel refreshed after ride an electric kickboard. and watch busking in the evening. Han river park provides a healing experience. I’d much rather be out in nature than stuck indoor place.


I usually go to the Han River Park with my friends. I talk with my friends while eating chicken and ramen on the lawn, take pictures, ride an electric kickboard while looking at the scenery of the Han River, feel refreshed, and watch busking in the evening. The Han River Park offers a healing experience. I'd much rather be in nature than stuck indoors.




Adults kick back under a tree or take their dogs for a walk, or enjoy a packed food and drinking with their friends. 


Adults kick under the tree, take their dogs for walks, or enjoy packaged food and alcohol with their friends.




Last fall, I went to Gangneung Anmok Beach with my friend. I played songs under the parasol, watched the sea while eating drinks and snacks, took a nap, and took a sand bath. I like activity too. So, I wanted to ride a banana boat, but I was a little sad that I couldn't because my friend didn't like it. But It was a really healing day with fresh air, warm sand, quiet and secluded beaches, and open ocean. I could lie out on the beach all day. This day was not a holiday season, but a weekday, so it was especially good because there pretty much deserted.


Last fall, I went to the Gangneung Anmok Beach with my friend. I played songs under the parasol, looked at the sea while eating drinks and snacks, took a nap, and did sand baths. I also liked being active, so I wanted to ride a banana boat, but I couldn't because my friend didn't like it and I was a little sad. But it was a really healing day with fresh air, warm sand, a quiet, quiet beach, and an open sea. I could lie on the beach all day long. This day was a weekday, not a holiday season, so it was especially nice to have many deserted places.




Because I live in mountain village, I need to travel out of town to find beach. Personally, I prefer jeju island’s beach. The ocean water is emerald green and crystal clear. There are dark gray rocks on the shallow sea side, and they harmonize well with the ocean. The wind can blow hard and ruin your hairstyle. But if you look at the emerald green ocean, you’ll feel refreshed and healing. And there are many pretty cafes around. You can drink coffee while looking at the beach and take many pretty pictures. jeju island’s beach the prettiest beach in Korea and definitely my favorite place .


I live in a mountain village, so I have to leave the village to find a beach. Personally, I prefer the beaches of Jeju Island. The sea water is emerald green and crystal clear. There are dark gray rocks on the shallow sea side, and they are in good harmony with the sea. The wind blows hard, so you can ruin your hairstyle. But looking at the emerald green ocean will be refreshing and healing. And there are many pretty cafes around. You can drink coffee and take many pretty pictures while looking at the beach. The beaches of Jeju Island are the prettiest beaches in Korea, and they are definitely my favorite.





I usually take a walk on the beach or take a nap under a parasol. Last fall, I went to Gangneung Anmok Beach with my friend. I played songs under the parasol, watched the sea while eating drinks and snacks, took a nap, and took a sand bath. I like activity too. These activities a good way to clear my head.


I usually take a walk on the beach or take a nap under a parasol. Last fall, I went to Gangneung Anmok Beach with my friend. I played songs under the parasol, looked at the sea while eating drinks and snacks, took a nap, and took a sand bath. I also like activities. These activities are a great way to clear my head.





I like Keshi, Yonezkenshi, and IU. Among them, about IU, she is the most popular singer in Korea. She sings various kinds of songs, such as band music, ballads, and pop music. Regarding her appearance, she is white, thin, and cute. She is the ideal type for many men. She writes the lyrics and composes by herself, so her songs have many emotions. Listening to her songs, I sympathize with her and get comforted. Also, Her songs have a sentimental vibe. It’s easy to understand why she became so famous.


I like Keshi, Yonezkenshi, and IU. Among them, as for IU, she is the most popular singer in Korea. She sings various kinds of songs such as band music, ballads, and pop music. As for her appearance, she is white, thin, and cute. She is the ideal type for many men. She writes and compose songs herself, so her songs have many emotions. Listening to her songs, I sympathize with her and feel comforted. Also, her songs have a sentimental atmosphere. Listening to her songs is easy to understand why she became so famous.





Music is indispensable in my life. In the past, I used to listen to a lot of exciting songs like K-pop or hip-hop, but these days, I usually listen to emotional pop songs or J-pop. And sometimes I listen to CCM. When I listen to emotional pop songs, I enjoy listening to them because they make me fell sentimental and empathize, And I like animation and band songs, and there are so many great songs of animation ost and band music in J-pop. I get most of my music from youtube. When I cleaning, driving, bored, and frustrated, I listen to music that fits the atmosphere.

 

Music is indispensable in my life. I used to listen to a lot of exciting songs like K-pop and hip-hop, but these days, I usually listen to emotional pop songs or J-pop. And sometimes I listen to CCM. When I listen to emotional pop songs, I feel sentimental and empathize with them, so I enjoy listening to them. And I like animation and band songs, and there are so many cool songs from animation OST and band music in J-pop. I get most of my music from YouTube. When I clean, drive, feel bored, and feel stuffy, I listen to music that fits the mood.




When I usually go out, I search "Music that is good to listen to when preparing" on YouTube and prepare while listening to the song. This is because I don't get bored and feel good when I prepare while listening to music. However, there are a few times when I was late because I was preparing late while enjoying music. So I searched "Songs I listen to when I have to hurry" on YouTube and prepared it while listening to it. This song has a fast tempo and makes people nervous. I got impatient and finished preparing faster than usual. I think the influence of music on us is quite big. Listen to these songs when you have to do something urgently.


When I go out, I usually search "Music that is good to listen to when preparing" on YouTube and prepare while listening to music. This is because I don't get bored and feel good when preparing while listening to music. However, I was late a few times because I was late in preparing while enjoying music. So I searched for "Songs I Listen to when I have to hurry" on YouTube and prepared it while listening to it. This song has a fast tempo and makes people nervous. I got impatient and finished preparing faster than usual. I think the influence of music on us is quite big. Listen to these songs when you have an emergency.




I like emotional pop songs and band music genre music. First of all, band music has various instrument sounds such as electric guitar, bass, and drums. Especially, I think the sound of the electric guitar is really cool. When I listen to band music, I feel overwhelmed. I usually listen to band music when I exercise, clean, and feel bored. Emotional pop songs are calm and soft. The lyrics are mainly about separation or comforting lyrics. I usually think of someone I miss and get comforted by listening to these songs before I go to bed at night.


I like music in the genre of emotional pop songs and band music. First of all, band music has various instrument sounds such as electric guitar, bass, and drum. Especially, I think the sound of electric guitar is really cool. When I listen to band music, I feel overwhelmed. I usually exercise, clean, and listen to band music when I am bored. Emotional pop songs are calm and soft. The lyrics are mainly about parting or comforting. I usually think about the person I miss and get comforted by listening to these songs before I go to bed at night.




And they can also listen to the sound louder by connecting to a Bluetooth speaker or car.


And they can also connect to a Bluetooth speaker or car to hear the sound louder.




What's a little disappointing about smartphones is that data should be used in places where there is no Wi-Fi, but data usage fees are high.


What's a little disappointing about smartphones is that I have to use data where there is no Wi-Fi, but the data usage fee is expensive.




The first time I started yoga was when I was in college. At that time, all the good-looking celebrities did Pilates and yoga, so I signed up for a yoga academy to get in shape. At the beginning, yoga was a static exercise, but I sweated and had a hard time. But I was flexible, so I followed the moves well. All the other classes were fun, but the only class I hated was flying yoga. It was scary to float in the air hanging from the fabric, and my groin hurt so much because the fabric was tight. After that, Other than flying yoga classes, I participated in other yoga classes hard, and my body got great shape and I could stretch more easily. These days, I watch yoga videos on YouTube at home and do home training at home. There are also hard postures because I gained a lot of weight.

 

The first time I started yoga was when I was in college. At that time, good-looking celebrities did both pilates and yoga, and I enrolled in a yoga academy to take care of my body. I thought yoga was a static exercise, but I sweated and it was hard. But I followed the moves well because of the flexibility. All the other classes were fun, but the only class I hated was flying yoga. It was scary to float in the air while hanging from the fabric, and my groin hurt so much because the fabric was tight. After that, I participated in other yoga classes besides flying yoga classes, and my body shape got better, so I could stretch more easily. These days, I watch yoga videos on YouTube at home and do home training at home. I have gained a lot of weight, so I have a hard time in my body.




After registering for yoga class, I took flying yoga class for the first time. At first, I did the monkey pose as a basic movement, and it was a posture that was hanging upside down from a cloth, but I was so scared. Still, all the other members followed along well, so I kept trying, and I was able to do it. Then, I did a bat pose that hung higher and upside down. The next step was to hang higher and spread my legs, but I gave up because my groin hurt so much. I like to do various exercises. But flying yoga doesn't seem to suit me. After that, Other than flying yoga classes, I participated in other yoga classes hard.


It was my first flying yoga class since I signed up for it. At first, I did the monkey pose as the basic movement, and it was like hanging upside down from a cloth, but it was so scary. Still, other members were good at imitating it, so I kept trying, and I was able to do it, too. Then I did the bat position, which was higher and hung upside down. The next thing was hanging higher and spreading my legs out, but I gave up because my groin hurt so much. I like to do many different exercises. But flying yoga doesn't seem to suit me. After that, I worked hard on other yoga classes besides flying yoga classes.




When I do yoga, I wear a dark gray yoga outfit that fits my body. Posture is important when exercising, and this outfit is perfect for exercising because it allows me to see the posture better and It’s a sweat absorbing material.


When I do yoga, I wear a dark gray yoga outfit that fits my body perfectly. Posture is important when exercising, which is suitable for exercising because you can see it better and absorb sweat.





Last fall, I went to Gangneung Anmok Beach with my friend. I played songs under the parasol, watched the sea while eating drinks and snacks, took a nap, and took a sand bath. I like activity too. So, I wanted to ride a banana boat, but I was a little sad that I couldn't because my friend didn't like it. But It was a really healing day with fresh air, warm sand, quiet and secluded beaches, and open ocean. I could lie out on the beach all day. This day was not a holiday season, but a weekday, so it was especially good because there pretty much deserted.


위에 동일한 지문이 나와 생략합니다.



I like hiking, but I like the beach more. Because I live in mountain village, I need to travel out of town to find beach. Personally, I prefer jeju island’s beach. The ocean water is emerald green and crystal clear. There are dark gray rocks on the shallow sea side, and they harmonize well with the ocean. The wind can blow hard and ruin your hairstyle. But if you look at the emerald green ocean, you’ll feel refreshed and healing. And there are many pretty cafes around. You can drink coffee while looking at the beach and take many pretty pictures. jeju island’s beach the prettiest beach in Korea and definitely my favorite place .


위에 중복된 지문이 나와 생략합니다.




I search for must-eat food, must-go places, and traffic information on travel blog or Instagram or youtube. Then, first, book your flight tickets, then make a itinerary and budget and book your accommodation. I actually love to travel, but I have to book a plane ticket first because I'm lazy to make a schedule or pack. Otherwise, I would not be able to travel. I have made arrangements with a friend to go on a trip and have had a few breakdowns. Neither of them has made any travel plans. In the past, I decided to go on a trip with a friend, but we both didn't plan a trip, so there were a few trips that broke down. Also, we booked a flight, but we didn't plan my trip in advance, and we planned it in a hurry on the day of the trip, but we closed everywhere we went and the movement got twisted.


I Search travel blogs, Instagram, or YouTube for must-eat foods, must-see places, and transportation information. Then, first, book a flight ticket and then book an accommodation with a travel schedule and budget. In fact, I like traveling, but I have to book a flight ticket first because I can't be bothered to pack my schedule or luggage. Otherwise, I won't be able to travel. I made an appointment to go on a trip with a friend and had a few problems. I was supposed to go on a trip with a friend before, but both of them didn't make plans for the trip, so I made urgent plans on the day of the trip, and the traffic line got twisted because they were closed everywhere I went.





I like to travel, but I also like to spend my vacation at home. I do housework that has been pushed back, such as washing dishes, washing laundry, and cleaning the floor at home, and I ride a running machine or do stretching. Actually, I don't exercise often. I usually like to listen to music at home, watch dramas or animations that I wanted to watch, or read novels or webtoons. I'm almost one body with my bed at home. I lie down and watch Netflix without thinking about anything. I think I can stay at home for more than a month if I have a smartphone. 


I like to travel, but I also like to spend my vacation at home. I do housework at home, such as washing dishes, doing laundry, cleaning the floor, and riding a running machine or stretching. Actually, I don't exercise very often. I usually like to listen to music or watch dramas or animations that I wanted to watch, or watch novels or webtoons at home. I am almost one body with my bed at home. I watch Netflix while lying down without thinking. I think I can stay at home for more than a month if I have a smartphone.





When I studied abroad in Shanghai a year ago, I remember the birthday of my roommate's American short hair cat, his name is"Cookie". I really thought and loved "Cookie" like a family. On Cookie's birthday, I prepared a cat cake, a birthday hat, and a cat bib, and sang a birthday song for Cookie with my roommate. Cookie didn't like wearing a hat and chin, so she didn't look good. I also played a lot of hunting games that cookies like. I was proud because “cookie” enjoyed the cake. My roommate now works in Shenzhen, China, and I am in Korea. I cried a lot the day I sent cookies. I still miss them so much now. Can I see “cookie”again? I miss and remember when I played at home with cookies. I want cookies to be happy anywhere.


I remember the birthday of my roommate's American bobble cat when I studied abroad in Shanghai a year ago. His name is 'Cookie.' I really thought and loved 'Cookie' like a family. On Cookie's birthday, I prepared a cat cake, a birthday hat, and a cat bib and sang Cookie's Happy Birthday with my roommate. Cookie didn't like to wear a hat and chin, so he didn't look good. He also played a lot of hunting games that Cookie liked. "Cookie" was proud because he enjoyed the cake. My roommate is now working in Shenzhen, China, and I am in Korea. I cried a lot the day I sent the cookies. I still miss them so much. Can I see "Cookie" again? I miss and remember playing with cookies at home. I hope Cookie is happy anywhere.

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