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2.설문주제
거주지
Q1. please tell me about your house. what’s your favorite room? What does it look like? Why do you like that room? (묘사짧게 배점 낮음) -장소묘사,좋아하는방
Well,,, I live on the second floor of a personal residence. I’ve got a kitchen, a living room, a dressing room, and two bed room. Of those, the room I like the most is my bedroom, which is located in right beside the main entrance. My bedroom is not a large room, but it’s my safe haven. It’s got treadmill, book shelf, and a comfortable bed. And one more thing, there is a window right beside the bed, so i can see the sky. Whenever I open it, I can get some fresh air, and I can see the stars at night, which helps clear my thoughts. Of all the rooms in my house, my bedroom is definitely my favorite place to hang out. Sort of,,,The only complaint l have is that the room needs desk and chair to read in. but the room is small, so there is no place to put in.

Q2. Compare the home you lived in before to the one you live in now. What are differences between those two homes? Provide me with as many details as possible. -두가지 대상비교
Let me see,,, Up until one years ago, I lived in an old apartment in a shanghai with a roommate and a cat. The home was where I lived when I studied abroad in Shanghai, and it was very different from where I live in now. The shanghai home was a small, old apartment with a bedroom, a living room, a kitchen, and a bathroom. The bedroom had large windows that let in lots of sunlight and an indoor balcony. There was a cat tower on the balcony and the cat liked to watch birds outside the window from the cat tower. on the plus side, shanghai home was conveniently located near many good restaurants and cafes. Also, living in the city makes it easier to have a social life. In contrast, my current home is a personal residence. This home is about 28 years old, and it has a better interior than a Shanghai home and an outdoor balcony, so I'm growing plants on the balcony. On the minus side, my home is the countryside, so there are not many places to play.


Q3. Have you ever had any problems with your home? What was the problem, and how did you deal with it? Give me as many details as possible. / Q8. experience at home (경험배점높음)
Well,,, A big problem(experience) I had with my home was that silverfish kept coming out of the house. Originally, there were no silverfish in this house, but when I lived in Seongnam studio apartment in the past, the silverfish that was there moved. I bought a bug trap and made the room dry and cleaned hard, but the silverfish kept coming out, so I was really really stressed. Later on YouTube, told me that I have to spray pesticide, so I sprayed pesticide in gaps on the floor and under furniture every time I saw silverfish, and now I almost couldn't see them. I realized from that experience that silverfish like dark and humid, that their habitat is a gap in the floor, and that pesticide is the best for getting rid of silverfish.

Q4. I would like to know about your neighborhood. What does your neighborhood look like? Please describe your neighborhood in as much detail as possible. (묘사배점 낮음,짧게)-장소묘사
Well,,, I live in a neighborhood located in pyeongchang. It was the place where the 2018 Pyeongchang Winter Olympics were held. As it’s a countryside, there are many mountains, valleys, fields and Cafes with a nice atmosphere around it. There are restaurants and shops, but there are not many franchises and buildings. My neighborhood is quiet and not many people. It's a good neighborhood, but it's a little uncomfortable that food delivery and public transportation are not developed like a city. However, my neighborhood is always comfortable and good place to me because my beloved family lives there and I have memories of my childhood.

Q5. Can you tell me about your neighbors? Describe one of your neighbors in detail. how did you first become acquainted with that neighbor? Are you close to the person? What do you usually do together? (묘사배점 낮음,짧게)-사람묘사
Well,,, A foreigner and a couple live under my house. Actually, I'm not very close to my neighbors. I rarely see them and I don't know their appearance. One time, while I was going to home, three foreigners greeted me first, so I said hello. They seemed like kind people. And then,,, The lady downstairs feeds the street cats every day. I think she really loves cats. I also like cats, so I feel grateful to her.


Q6. Please tell me about a memorable experience you have had in your neighborhood. When and where did it occur? What happened that made the experience so memorable? Please describe it in detail. (경험배점 높음)
Let me see,,, Recently, when I was taking a walk in the evening, a brown street cat came to me and rubbed it and lied down, acting cute and purr. The cat was so cute, so I sometimes went to pet it and gave churu to him. I saw such a cute street cat for the first time. Usually, street cat runs away or is not allow to touch it, but this cat was like a dog. There was a box and cat food in front of the restaurant, so I thought that the owner of the restaurant was taking care of him. I went to see the cat again later, but I was worried that the cat was gone, there was only a bowl. The next day, I called the restaurant, the owner said she was taking the cat to home and raising it. I was so glad to hear that, but sometimes I miss the cat.

Q7. The home I live in
Well,,, I live on the second floor of a personal residence. I’ve got a kitchen, a living room, a dressing room, and two bed room. This home is about 28 years old, and an outdoor balcony, so I'm growing plants on the balcony. On the minus side, my home is the countryside, so there are not many places to play. My home is not a large, but it’s my safe haven.

Q9. the neighborhood where I lived when I was young
Well,,, when I was young, I was lived in a neighborhood located in pyeongchang. It was the place where the 2018 Pyeongchang Winter Olympics were held. As it was a countryside, there were many mountains, valleys, fields and Cafes with a nice atmosphere around it. There were restaurants and shops, but there were not many franchises and buildings. My childhood neighborhood was quiet and not many people. It was a good neighborhood, but it was a little uncomfortable that food delivery and public transportation were not developed like a city. However, my childhood neighborhood is always comfortable and good place to me because my beloved family lives there and I have memories of my childhood.

Q10. activities that you enjoy doing in your neighborhood
I usually go to the park with my friends. I talk with my friends while eating some foods on the lawn, take pictures, While looking at the scenery of park Or I take a walk or take a nap while listening to music. and sometimes watch busking. These activities a good way to clear my head. I’d much rather be out in nature than stuck indoor place.


영화관람
Q1. In your background survey, you indicated that you like to see movies. What kind of movies do you enjoy watching? Why do you like to watch those kinds of movies? Tell me about these movies in as much detail as possible. (묘사배점낮음,짧게)
Well,,, I like thriller, zombie and fantasy movies. The tings about these films that attracts me is that they are highly suspenseful. Something like that,,, Thriller and zombie movies are fun to watch while my heart is tense. In addition, in fantasy and zombie movies, special effects and special makeup make the movie more immersive. In my option, these films are the perfect type of movie for killing time. When I'm bored at home, time flies when I watch movies like this.

Q2. I like you to tell me about your favorite actor. Who is the actor? What movies has he or she starred in? what do you like most about him or her? Please tell me about the actor in as much detail as possible. (묘사배점낮음,짧게)
Actually, I don't really have a favorite movie star right now. let mi see,,, When I was in high school, I watched the movie Titanic and liked Leonardo DiCaprio. I was fascinated by DiCaprio's face after watching the movie. How can a person be so handsome and smile so pretty. After the movie was over, I searched DiCaprio on the Internet and was surprised once again. Sort of,,, DiCaprio in the picture of the latest article looks like an old man with a big belly and a bushy beard. Although his appearance has changed a lot, but, I think he is a great actor who is really outstanding for his acting skills.

Q3. Please tell me about the most memorable movie you have seen. What was the movie about? Who was in it? Why was it memorable? (경험 배점 높음)
Well,,, my most memorable movie I have ever seen is “spirited away”. I watched it at the home with my mom and younger brother. This movie is an animation and fantasy genre. The movie is about Chihiro going to the world of the gods when she passes through a suspicious tunnel on the day she moved with her family, and her parents become pigs after eating the food of the gods, and Chihiro goes on a witch Yubaba mission to save her parents and return to the human world. There are also episodes with various monsters while carrying out the mission, and a boy named Haku helps Chihiro. Something like that,,, When I watched the movie, I was really immersed in it like I became Chihiro. It's really interesting when Chihiro does the mission, and it's a movie that's heartbreaking and lingering in the scene where chihiro breaks up with Haku at the end. I really like this movie, so I watched it again and again even after growing up.

Q4. Has your taste in movies changed over time? Tell me about the changes in your tastes in movies over the past few years. How are the movies you enjoy now different from those in the past? Please explain in as much detail as possible.- 시작한계기와 변화
Well,,, When I was young, I liked watching horror movies with my friends. I couldn't watch it alone, I had to watch it with my friend, but the nervous and chilling feeling was the charm of horror movies. But now, I don't really like horror movies. When I was in high school, I watched a movie called "orphan", It's about an adopted girl committing murder. After watching the movie, I felt really bad. After that, I don't watch horror movies, but I watch thriller, zombie, fantasy, and animation. Movies of this genre don't feel bad even after watching a movie and are perfect for killing time.

Q6. What I do before and after watching a movie
I go to the bathroom before watching a movie. Because when I go to the bathroom in the middle of watching a movie, my immersion is broken and I don’t want to be bothered. And one more thing,, I buy snacks such as popcorn, nachos, squid, and coke and wait. After I finish watching the movie, I throw away the trash and go to the bathroom right away.

Q7. one's favorite movie theater
I used to watch the movie Avatar in 3D, and when I went to Disneyland before, I had a 4D video experience and it was so fun and immersive. The chair moved, the wind and water came out. It felt like I was in the video. I want to go to the 4D movie theater or IMAX movie theater later. I haven't been there yet. But, I think it's more immersive and fun than 3D.

공원가기
Q1. In your background survey ,you mentioned that you like going to parks. Please thell me about the park you like to go to. Where is it located, and what does it look like? What makes it special? (묘사 배점낮음 짧게)
I like the Han River Park in Seoul. The park runs along a han river. There are trees every where you look. There’s grassy area where you can have a picnic. You can order chicken and ramen while looking at the Han River, take a walk, ride a bike on the bike trails, or ride a kickboard. The park is very crowded on weekends. Also, there are people busking in the evening, so you can listen to songs. I go there once in spring or fall. I get rid of my stress by chatting with my friends while eating delicious food or riding a kickboard while watching the scenery of the Han River.


Q2. Please tell me about something interesting or memorable that has happened park. When was it? What were you doing? Who were you with? Please describe why it was so memorable in detail. / recent experience of going to the park (경험 배점높음, 길게)
Let me see,,, Recently, when I was taking a walk on the park, a brown street cat came to me and rubbed it and lied down, acting cute and purr. The cat was so cute, so I sometimes went to pet it and gave churu to him. I saw such a cute street cat for the first time. Usually, street cat runs away or is not allow to touch it, but this cat was like a dog. There was a box and cat food in front of the restaurant, so I thought that the owner of the restaurant was taking care of him. I went to see the cat again later, but I was worried that the cat was gone, there was only a bowl. The next day, I called the restaurant, the owner said she was taking the cat to home and raising it. I was so glad to hear that, but sometimes I miss the cat.

Q3. What kind of activities do you usually do at the park? Do you take walks or exercise at the park? Do you prefer to go there with others, or do you prefer to go alone? Please describe a typical day at the park.
I usually go to the han river park with my friends. I talk with my friends while eating some foods on the lawn, take pictures, While looking at the scenery of Han River Or I take a walk or take a nap while listening to music. and sometimes watch busking. These activities a good way to clear my head. I’d much rather be out in nature than stuck indoor place.



Q4. Please tell me about the activities people do at a park you often visit. What sorts of things do children do? How are they similar to or different from what adults do? Give me as many details as possible.
Han river park has something for everybody. Kids and adults both seem to love it. The young children who visit the park love playing games like tag. They are always shouting, laughing, and running around. There are fewer older kids who visit, and those who do typically play pickup games of basketball and soccer. Unlike the kids, Adults kick back under a tree or take their dogs for a walk, or enjoy a packed food and drinking with their friends. Occasionally you’ll see some people on dates, too, walking hand-in-hand through the park.

해변가기
Q1. Tell me about a memorable experience you have had at the beach. When was it? What happened? Who were you with? Explain what happened in detail to make it unforgettable.
(경험 배점높음, 길게)
Let me see,,, Recently, when I was taking a walk on the beach, a brown street cat came to me and rubbed it and lied down, acting cute and purr. The cat was so cute, so I sometimes went to pet it and gave churu to him. I saw such a cute street cat for the first time. Usually, street cat runs away or is not allow to touch it, but this cat was like a dog. There was a box and cat food in front of the restaurant, so I thought that the owner of the restaurant was taking care of him. I went to see the cat again later, but I was worried that the cat was gone, there was only a bowl. The next day, I called the restaurant, the owner said she was taking the cat to home and raising it. I was so glad to hear that, but sometimes I miss the cat.

Q2.you indicated in your background survey that you like going to beaches. Tell me about your favorite beach. Where is it, and what does it look like? Why do you like it there so much? (묘사배점 낮음,짧게)
Because I live in mountain village, I need to travel out of town to find beach. Personally, I prefer jeju island’s beach. The ocean water is emerald green and crystal clear. There are dark gray rocks on the shallow sea side, and they harmonize well with the ocean. The wind can blow hard and ruin your hairstyle. But if you look at the emerald green ocean, you’ll feel refreshed and healing. And there are many pretty cafes around. You can drink coffee while looking at the beach and take many pretty pictures. jeju island’s beach the prettiest beach in Korea and definitely my favorite place .

Q3. beach activities
I usually go to the beach with my friends. I talk with my friends while eating some foods on the beach, take pictures, While looking at the scenery of ocean Or I take a walk or take a nap while listening to music. and sometimes watch busking. These activities a good way to clear my head. I’d much rather be out in nature than stuck indoor place.

음악감상
Q1. Tell me about your favorite musician or singer. What kind of songs does he or she sing? Why do you like him or her? Describe him or her in as much detail as possible. (묘사 배점 낮음,짧게)
I like Keshi, Yonezkenshi, and IU. Among them, about IU, she is the most popular singer in Korea. She sings various kinds of songs, such as band music, ballads, and pop music. Regarding her appearance, she is white, thin, and cute. She is the ideal type for many men. She writes the lyrics and composes by herself, so her songs have many emotions. Listening to her songs, I sympathize with her and get comforted. Also, Her songs have a sentimental vibe. It’s easy to understand why she became so famous.
Q2. In your background survery, you indicated that you enjoy listening to music. What kind of music do you like? Why do you like it? When and where do you usually listen to music? how do you listen to music? /Q6. a change in one's taste for listening to music
Music is indispensable in my life. In the past, I used to listen to a lot of exciting songs like K-pop or hip-hop, but these days, I usually listen to emotional pop songs or J-pop. And sometimes I listen to CCM. When I listen to emotional pop songs, I enjoy listening to them because they make me fell sentimental and empathize, And I like animation and band songs, and there are so many great songs of animation ost and band music in J-pop. I get most of my music from youtube. When I cleaning, driving, bored, and frustrated, I listen to music that fits the atmosphere.

Q3. Tell me about the most memorable experience you have had while listening to music. when was it? Where did it happen? What made the experience so memorable? Please describe it in as much detail as possible. (경험,배점 높음 길게)
Let me see,,, Recently, when I was taking a walk while listening to music, a brown street cat came to me and rubbed it and lied down, acting cute and purr. The cat was so cute, so I sometimes went to pet it and gave churu to him. I saw such a cute street cat for the first time. Usually, street cat runs away or is not allow to touch it, but this cat was like a dog. There was a box and cat food in front of the restaurant, so I thought that the owner of the restaurant was taking care of him. I went to see the cat again later, but I was worried that the cat was gone, there was only a bowl. The next day, I called the restaurant, the owner said she was taking the cat to home and raising it. I was so glad to hear that, but sometimes I miss the cat.

Q4. I would like you to choose two genres of music you like and compare them. What are the differences between them? How do you feel when you listen to each type of music? provide as many details as possible./
I like emotional pop songs and band music genre music. First of all, band music has various instrument sounds such as electric guitar, bass, and drums. Especially, I think the sound of the electric guitar is really cool. When I listen to band music, I feel overwhelmed. I usually listen to band music when I exercise, clean, and feel bored. Emotional pop songs are calm and soft. The lyrics are mainly about separation or comforting lyrics. I usually think of someone I miss and get comforted by listening to these songs before I go to bed at night.


Q5. What kind of devices do people like to listen to music on? Can you tell me about the popilar ones? Why do people like them? Please explain about the devices in as much detail as possible. (묘사 배점낮음 짧게)
In the old days, people downloaded songs to MP3 and listened to them. These days, people listen to songs on their smartphones. The things about smartphones that people like is the convenience. Most people carry their smartphones with them everywhere, so these devices are always available to listen to music on. In addition, they can access the internet, so it’s possible to download songs or stream music on them. And they can also listen to the sound louder by connecting to a Bluetooth speaker or car. As an added bonus, there are a wide variety of music apps that people can use, such as YouTube, Melon. You can watch music videos, listen to complilations of songs that have been uploaded by other users, and so on. What's a little disappointing about smartphones is that data should be used in places where there is no Wi-Fi, but data usage fees are high.



요가
Q1. When did you start practicing yoga? What made you became interested in it? How did you feel when you first did yoga? Tell me about it in as much detail as possible.
The first time I started yoga was when I was in college. At that time, all the good-looking celebrities did Pilates and yoga, so I signed up for a yoga academy to get in shape. At the beginning, yoga was a static exercise, but I sweated and had a hard time. But I was flexible, so I followed the moves well. All the other classes were fun, but the only class I hated was flying yoga. It was scary to float in the air hanging from the fabric, and my groin hurt so much because the fabric was tight. After that, Other than flying yoga classes, I participated in other yoga classes hard, and my body got great shape and I could stretch more easily. These days, I watch yoga videos on YouTube at home and do home training at home. There are also hard postures because I gained a lot of weight.

Q2. Have you ever had an interesting or special experience while doing yoga? When was it? What happened? Talk about it in detail, and explain why it was so special.(경험배점 높음)
Let me see,,, Recently, When I was doing outdoor yoga, a brown street cat came to me and rubbed it and lied down, acting cute and purr. The cat was so cute, so I went to pet it and gave churu to him. I saw such a cute street cat for the first time. Usually, street cat runs away or is not allow to touch it, but this cat was like a dog. There was a box and cat food in front of the restaurant, so I thought that the owner of the restaurant was taking care of him. I went to see the cat again later, but I was worried that the cat was gone, there was only a bowl. The next day, I called the restaurant, the owner said she was taking the cat to home and raising it. I was so glad to hear that, but sometimes I miss the cat.


Q3. What you wear when you do yoga?(묘사배점 낮음 짧게)
When I do yoga, I wear a dark gray yoga outfit that fits my body. It's short sleeves on top and long pants on bottom. Posture is important when exercising, and this outfit is perfect for exercising because it allows me to see the posture better and It’s a sweat absorbing material.

국내-해외여행
Q1. What is the most memorable experience you have had while traveling? When and where did you go? What happened? Why was it memorable? Describe the experience in detail. (경험배점 높음)
Let me see,,, Recently, I went on a trip to Gangneung. When I was taking a walk, a brown street cat came to me and rubbed it and lied down, acting cute and purr. The cat was so cute, so I went to pet it and gave churu to him. I saw such a cute street cat for the first time. Usually, street cat runs away or is not allow to touch it, but this cat was like a dog. There was a box and cat food in front of the restaurant, so I thought that the owner of the restaurant was taking care of him. I went to see the cat again later, but I was worried that the cat was gone, there was only a bowl. The next day, I called the restaurant, the owner said she was taking the cat to home and raising it. I was so glad to hear that, but sometimes I miss the cat.

Q2. In your background survey, you indicated that you enjoy domestic travel, where do you like to visit? Which do you prefer, mountains or beaches? Describe the place you like to visit and why you like to go there. (묘사 배점낮음,짧게)
I like hiking, but I like the beach more. Because I live in mountain village, I need to travel out of town to find beach. Personally, I prefer jeju island’s beach. The ocean water is emerald green and crystal clear. There are dark gray rocks on the shallow sea side, and they harmonize well with the ocean. It's so windy that it can ruin your hairstyle. But if you look at the emerald green ocean, you’ll feel refreshing and healing. And there are many pretty cafes around. You can drink coffee while looking at the beach and take many pretty pictures. jeju island’s beach the prettiest beach in Korea and definitely my favorite place .

Q3. People must prepare they travel. What do you do to prepare for travel? Do you research in advance or make reservations? What special things do you do? Please describe your preparation in detail.
I search for must-eat food, must-go places, and traffic information on travel blog or Instagram or youtube. Then, first, book your flight tickets, then make a itinerary and budget and book your accommodation. I actually love to travel, but I have to book a plane ticket first because I'm lazy to make a schedule or pack. Otherwise, I would not be able to travel. I have made arrangements with a friend to go on a trip and have had a few breakdowns. Neither of them has made any travel plans. In the past, I decided to go on a trip with a friend, but we both didn't plan a trip, so there were a few trips that broke down. Also, we booked a flight, but we didn't plan my trip in advance, and we planned it in a hurry on the day of the trip, but we closed everywhere we went and the movement got twisted.

Q4. my first experience on a trip-경험배점높음
My first destination was Jeju Island. I went there with my parents when I was in elementary school and it was so nice. We went to green tea fields, citrus farms, beaches, and rode horses. Personally, I prefer jeju island’s beach. The ocean water was emerald green and crystal clear. There were dark gray rocks on the shallow sea side, and they harmonized well with the ocean. It was so windy that I ruined my hairstyle. But as soon as I saw the emerald green ocean, I felt refreshed and healed. And there were many pretty cafes around. I drank coffee while looking at the beach and took many pretty pictures. jeju island’s beach the prettiest beach in Korea and definitely my favorite place .

집에서 보내는 휴가
Q1. I your background survey, you indicated that you prefer to stay at home during vacations. How do you spend your vacation at home? What do you usually do? Give me as many details as possible.
I like to travel, but I also like to spend my vacation at home. I do housework that has been pushed back, such as washing dishes, washing laundry, and cleaning the floor at home, and I ride a running machine or do stretching. Actually, I don't exercise often. I usually like to listen to music at home, watch dramas or animations that I wanted to watch, or read novels or webtoons. I'm almost one body with my bed at home. I lie down and watch Netflix without thinking about anything. I think I can stay at home for more than a month if I have a smartphone. A vacation at home is a perfect way for me to get rid of my stress. And after resting up at home, I feel recharged and ready to get back into the swing of things.

Q2. I would like to know about the most memorable vacation you have spent at home. When was it? What did you do and who were you with? Why was it so memorable? / Q4.The most recent vacation I had at home (경험 배점 높음)
Well,,, my most memorable stay at home vacation was last weekend. I watched a movie “spirited away” with my mom and younger brother. This movie was an animation and fantasy genre. The movie was about Chihiro going to the world of the gods when she passes through a suspicious tunnel on the day she moved with her family, and her parents became pigs after eating the food of the gods, and Chihiro goes on a witch Yubaba mission to save her parents and return to the human world. There are also episodes with various monsters while carrying out the mission, and a boy named Haku helps Chihiro. Something like that,,, When I watched the movie, I was really immersed in it like I became Chihiro. It's really interesting when Chihiro does the mission, and it's a movie that's heartbreaking and lingering in the scene where chihiro breaks up with Haku at the end. I think it's best to watch movies at home on my day off.