과거 현재 집비교/ 집 문제 스크립트 입니다.
구성이나 표현, 문법이나 양은 충분한지 첨삭 부탁드립니다!!
In the past, my house was an old one without parking space.
The house that I used to live in the past was an old building with no parking lot.
-> 구조를 바꾸면 좋을 것 같습니다.
But now, in a newly built apartment, there's a parking lot.
But, There is a parking lot in my current house.
Well, parking used to be a real pain back in the day.
In the past, I had a really hard time parking.
When I got home after work, it would take took me about 30 minutes just to find a spot to park. parking space.
You know, I found it really stressful.
I was really stressed out because of that.
So, I really wanted to move to a house with a parking lot. And I was lucky to find a house with a parking lot,
I really like the new house.
If you're thinking about moving, make sure to keep this in mind, Eva
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