Q1. Tell
me about your bedroom. What does it look like and what do you keep in it? Use
as many details as possible to describe it.

A1. My
room is cozy and comfortable. 

I feel cosy and comfortable in my bedroom. 

Most of furnitures the furniture in my room is made of wood and brown. 

-> 가구는 셀 수 없어요.

My room is not so large that big, but there is everything I
need is in my room.

I have There are a bed, a desk, a bookshelf, a chair and two closets in my room. 

Also, there
are big windows right in front of the desk, So I can feel comfortable while studying or
reading a books. 

I love my comfortable room decorated in my style.

Q2. It
is important for a family to spend time together. When do you spend time at
home with your family? What does your family usually do at home?

I live
with my parents, and all of them go to work on weekdays.  but it’s hard to spend time together because everyone works on weekdays.

And I’m busy playing
with my friends on weekends, so we are together at dinner time on weekdays. 

I usually hang out with my friends during the day on the weekend, So I usually have a meal with my family on a weekend dinner.

-> play같은 경우 어린 아이들의 놀이가 떠오르기 때문데 hang out을 사용하는 것이 적절합니다.

We usually have a weekend dinner at home, because my mother is pretty good at cooking. 

After dinner, we turn off the lights and watch a horror movie in the living room.

Q3. Have
you made any changes to your house within the last few years? If so, what kinds
of changes have you made to your home? Are you satisfied with the change?

I recently
cleaned up my room. 

I rearranged my stuffs and threw away the unused things to make the room look clean. I had too many clothes,  

So I chose clothes that I didn’t wear and threw them away. 

And I bought some baskets for small
things like letters, hair clips and accessories. 

This made it easier for me to find things and there’s more room for me to use.

->시제와 단수 복수 사용에 유의하셔야 할 것 같습니다. 

※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.