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Q11. 야외 운동 vs 헬스장 운동 중 선호하는 것은?

I think exercise exercising in a gym is much better than exercise
exercising outdoors.

Because first, we can exercise uh anytime,
regardless of the weather when we exercise at the gym.

For example, when even if it's rain rainy
or snowy, or anything, anytime, we just can
go to the gym and do exercise, which is
really good.

Second, when we exercise in the gym, we
can help, we can get a help from other people in the gym[중복].

In my case, when I exercise at the gym, I
become a friend friends of with other people and we can exercise together. We motivate each other to exercise harder, and we can get a
lot of exercising tips.

So I think the gym is better Therefore, I think it is better to exercise
in a gym rather than outdoors.

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