전체적으로 자연스럽고 내용도 좋습니다. 다만 오픽에서는 원어민이 실제로 말하는 표현으로 조금만 다듬으면 훨씬 높은 점수를 받을 수 있습니다.

-The person I’d like to talk about is the lady next door.

Every time with meet, we welcome we meet, we greet each other warmly happily.

Regarding her appearance, she’s got has brown eyes and brown curly brown hair.

she used not didn’t use to wear glasses, but now she wears them and I think they make her look much

looks a lot younger than her age.

as for her personality, she’s a bit laid-back and easygoing. women.

she’s also a great very strong women who beat cancer.

so, what I like the most about her is her toughness and positive attitude.

I always hope she stays healthy. want her to be healty. 

I think i’m really lucky to have such a good wonderful neighbor.