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mina |조회 59| 추천 0
- 2026.02.04




안녕하세요 해커스 OPIc 책으로 독학 중입니다.
빈출 질문에 대한 답변 첨삭 부탁드립니다.
1. 자기 소개
Hello. My name is hyemin yoon, and I am 34 years old. I was worked as a administrative staff at SungKyunKwan University.
I am curretly a housewife.
I live with my family : my husband, my lovely daughter and me.
My daughter will go nursery from March. So, I will looking for a job when she is get used to go nursery.
I think I am an outgoing person. I like to hang out with people.
In my free time, I like to read books or go jogging.
2. 직장 소개
I worked at SungKyunKwan University. It is located in Seoul and Suwon. It was established in 1946.
The university is known as an educational institution with the longest history in Korea.
My office was in the college of Pharmacy building, but I usually worked at home.
I supported the operation of the research fund.
2-1. 사무실 묘사
I was working at Pharmacoepidemiology lab.
There were a lot of students in my office.
Studenst had to work with computer, so there were many computers.
The lab was divided into 2 places. If we had a meeting, we gathered in the professors lab or another large classroom.
2-2. 사무실 기기와 장비
I made use of computer and printer in my office.
I used them to do my paperwork.
2-3.점심시간에 하는 일
During my lunch break, I usually ate lunch with co-workers.
After lunch, I often took a walk on campus.
If I worked at home, I did my remaining housework.
3-1. 회사에서의 직급과 업무
I was administrative staff in the college of pharmacy.
I was managing research funds, personnel expenses, and claiming expenses.
I planned to use research funds, managed research funds while the project was in progress, and finalized the accounts after the research was completed.
3-2. 기억에 남는 교육
The most memorable training was managing personnel expenses.
Because there were a lot of researchers in our lab, so it was difficult to understand how to manage them.
3-3. 어려움을 겪었던 프로젝트
I had a problem with paperwork.
I misunderstood the regulations of the contributing agency, so there was a lot of disapproved costs.
But, we finished well through communication with the person in charge of the business.
When the project was successfully completed, I felt really relieved.
4-1. 방 가구 가전제품 묘사
My bedroom is recently reorganized. I moved our bed to my daughters room. So we sleep together every night.
Now, I have a sofa and TV in my room. After my daughter go to sleep, my husband and I often watch movie.
4-2. 집에서 가족들과 하는 일
I usually spend time with my family everyday.
We usually have meals together at home.
My husband helps my daughter eat, and I prepare meals.
After dinner, I usually do the dishes.
My husband and my daughter play together in a living room.
Thanks to our lovely daughter, our home is very cheerful everyday.
4-3. 최근 집에 준 변화
We moved our bed to my daughters room. She wanted to sleep together.
We all satisfy with change now. We also decide to move our sofa from living room to master room.
It made the room mor pleasant. My husband and I are very happy with watching TV in sofa.
5-1. 이웃 묘사
Actually, I dont know well our neighbors.
I just say hello if I meet them in elevators.
5-2. 동네에서 있었던 기억에 남는 경험
I recently had a pleasant experience in my neighborhood.
It was few months ago. My friend visited our home by car.
She parked her car in our apartments parking lot.
Few hours later, someone called my friends cell phone. It was our neighbor. He was worried that the headlights were on for hours. It could discharge the car.
So we were very thankful to him.
5-3. 과거와 현재의 동네 비교
I live in an apartment complex.
I moved to our neighborhood just 1 years ago. I heard that there was no apartment in my neighborhood in the past. There was only a huge farmland. And now, our neighborhood is in new town. So many apartments and tall buildings were in the town.
I like it because there are mamy children and young couples. It is very cheerful place.
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