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첨삭지기 |조회 36| 추천 0
- 2025.12.17




My room is clean and well-organized. It has large windows, so it is very bright and cheerful. My room is also very quite small, so I can clean it quickly. fast. I have a chair, a bookshelf, and a closet in my room. There is also a desk and a computer where I work. I Recently, I took out of the books on the shelf that I don’t use anymore . So now most of the shelves are empty.
I really like my room a lot.
I am very busy during the week, so I usually spend time with my family on weekends. We usually eat dinner together and talk about our daily lives.each other for their story. My house is very cozy, so we really enjoy spending time there. My sister and I usually watch dramas together. And My parents like to watch watching TV.
I live in an apartment, and I recently redecorated my doorway. I replaced the old wallpaper with new white wallpaper which made the doorway much brighter.The new wallpaper is white. It made the doorway brighter. I also decided to get a new frame I and chose some photos to put it in. Finally, I put them into a new frame. I am very happy with how my doorway looks now.
I am very busy during the week, so I usually spend time with my family on weekends. We usually eat dinner together and talk about our daily lives.
I live in an apartment, and I recently redecorated my doorway. I replaced the old wallpaper with new white wallpaper which made the doorway much brighter.
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| 84 | 토익스피킹 첨삭해주세요! | 허*돈 | 61 | 2024.10.14 |
| 83 | RE:토익스피킹 첨삭답변드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 69 | 2024.10.14 |
| 82 | 토익스피킹 첨삭부탁드려요! | 김***s | 62 | 2024.10.14 |
| 81 | 해커스 토익스피킹 첨삭해주세요! | **ipdish | 83 | 2024.10.18 |
| 80 | RE:첨삭 답변드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 106 | 2024.10.19 |
| 79 | 첨삭 부탁드립니당 | 김상현ss | 100 | 2024.10.19 |
| 78 | RE:첨삭 답변드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 74 | 2024.10.19 |
| 77 | 첨삭 부탁드립니다 | cc5072 | 72 | 2024.10.19 |
| 76 | RE:첨삭 답변드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 76 | 2024.10.22 |
| 75 | 첨삭 부탁드리겠습니다 | cc5072 | 86 | 2024.10.19 |
| 74 | RE:첨삭 답변드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 108 | 2024.10.19 |
| 73 | 첨삭 부탁드립니다 | cc5072 | 118 | 2024.10.19 |
| 72 | [OPIc] 첨삭답변드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 99 | 2024.11.20 |
| 71 | [OPIc] IM3가 목표인데 첨삭 부탁드립니다. | 문강현 | 103 | 2024.11.15 |
| 70 | [OPIc] RE:오픽 첨삭 답변드립니다. [1] | 첨삭지기 | 127 | 2025.01.04 |
| 69 | [OPIc] 오픽 첨삭 부탁드립니다. | jt | 75 | 2025.01.04 |
| 68 | [OPIc] RE:오픽 자기소개 첨삭 답변드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 91 | 2025.01.06 |
| 67 | [OPIc] 오픽 자기소개 첨삭 부탁드립니다. 감사합니다. | 채원 | 83 | 2025.01.05 |
| 66 | [OPIc] RE:첨삭답변드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 90 | 2025.01.15 |
| 65 | [OPIc] 첨삭부탁드려요 | 김수아 | 80 | 2025.01.15 |
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