>I had read this book when I was in primary school lower classes time.

>And because of English homework at this time, I read the book written in English.

>To tell a story ; 알리바바 is poor, but he has a good mind.

>One day, he sees (sawd - one day는 과거시제와 어울림 -> found가 더 좋음) a secret cave of thieves accidentally.

>And he comes having (got) treasures from that place.

>So he becomes a rich man.

>알리바바 has a elder brother called 카심.

>카심 is (a) very greedy person.

>카심 hears whole story about this secret cave, and starts (for -->to find) the cave alone.

>But he doesn\'t get treasures.

>Preferably, he meets tragic death because he forgets the order.

>Thieves who are robbed of treasures try to find out 알리바바‘s house and invade his house.

>However, intelligent maid 모르지아나,( of 알리바바--> 알리바바\'s maid), helps him out of difficulties.

>And then 알리바바 gets married to 모르지아나.

>Instruction in this story is that a greedy person makes own die finally and a person must live wisely.

전반적으로 아주 잘 쓰셨는데요, 이야기를 과거시제로 바꾸면 더 좋겠네요. ^^