- 2004.01.19
>I had read this book when I was in primary school lower classes time.
>>And because of English homework at this time, I read the book written in English.
>>To tell a story ; 알리바바 is poor, but he has a good mind.
>>One day, he sees (sawd - one day는 과거시제와 어울림 -> found가 더 좋음) a secret cave of thieves accidentally.
>>And he comes having (got) treasures from that place.
>>So he becomes a rich man.
>>알리바바 has a elder brother called 카심.
>>카심 is (a) very greedy person.
>>카심 hears whole story about this secret cave, and starts (for -->to find) the cave alone.
>>But he doesn\'t get treasures.
>>Preferably, he meets tragic death because he forgets the order.
>>Thieves who are robbed of treasures try to find out 알리바바‘s house and invade his house.
>>However, intelligent maid 모르지아나,( of 알리바바--> 알리바바\'s maid), helps him out of difficulties.
>>And then 알리바바 gets married to 모르지아나.
>>Instruction in this story is that a greedy person makes own die finally and a person must live wisely.
>전반적으로 아주 잘 쓰셨는데요, 이야기를 과거시제로 바꾸면 더 좋겠네요. ^^
>>보라색으로 첨가 해봤습니다~
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