- 2004.01.18
>I had read this book when I was in primary school lower classes time.
>And because of English homework at this time, I read the book written in English.
>To tell a story ; 알리바바 is poor, but he has a good mind.
>One day, he sees (sawd - one day는 과거시제와 어울림 -> found가 더 좋음) a secret cave of thieves accidentally.
>And he comes having (got) treasures from that place.
>So he becomes a rich man.
>알리바바 has a elder brother called 카심.
>카심 is very greedy person.
>카심 hears whole story about this secret cave, and starts for the cave alone.
>But he doesn\'t get treasures.
>Preferably, he meets tragic death because he forgets the order.
>Thieves who are robbed of treasures try to find out 알리바바‘s house and invade his house.
>However, intelligent maid 모르지아나 of 알리바바 helps him out of difficulties.
>And then 알리바바 gets married to 모르지아나.
>Instruction in this story is that a greedy person makes own die finally and a person must live wisely.
전반적으로 아주 잘 쓰셨는데요, 이야기를 과거시제로 바꾸면 더 좋겠네요. ^^
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