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- 2023.01.18
1. 자기소개
My name is Sang Hee Choi. I am 24 years old. I live in an apartment in
a suburb of Seoul with my parents. I am currently a senior majoring in Chinese
Language and Literature. I chose this major because I love Chinese culture.
Also, as Korea and China are closely connected both politically and
economically, I believe fluency in Chinese will become a big asset of mine when
I find a job.
As for my personality, I’m a bit shy when I meet someone for the
first time. But once I become intimate with them, I get talkative and
hilarious. My most recent addiction is yoga. Yoga is a great way to gain
strength not only physically, but also mentally. I do 30 minutes of yoga every
morning.
Someday I hope to work for a major trading
company, because I believe, in that way, I can make the most of my ability in
foreign languages. Now that my university education will soon be finished, I’m
looking forward to starting my career.
2. 당신이 자주 방문하는 공원에서 사람들이 하는 활동에 대해
이야기해 주세요. 아이들은 어떤 일을 하나요? 그것은 어른들이
하는 일과 어떻게 같거나 다른가요? (대상 비교)
I love going to a park near
my home. I think the park is an interesting place because people of all ages
are there having a good time in their own ways. If you observe them well enough,
you will see both similarities and differences between adults and kids over how
they spend time at the park.
Let’s start with adults. They normally go to the
park by themselves or with friends. Since their biggest purpose of going to the
park is to relieve stress, they usually go for a stroll rather than running at
a fast pace. On the other hand, kids are more likely to go to the park with
their parents. To kids, the park is a playground. Therefore, activities that
kids like to do at the park are more diverse and active than those of adults.
Kids would like better to run, play badminton, or ride bicycle.
Despite all the differences, one thing adults and kids have in
common is that they both love going to the park. The park is for everybody.
3. 요즘 공원에 관련된 주요 이슈에 대해서 알고 싶어요. 공원 이용자들이 직면하는 가장 큰 문제는 무엇인가요? 이 문제를
해결하기 위해 무엇이 필요할까요? (이슈)
The ongoing issue related to public parks is
littering. One reason this has been happening is lack of trash bins. Because
trash bins installed are less than needed, trash bins are always full of trash.
Even when people want to dump properly in a trash bin, they can’t because there
is no room for it.
Another reason causing the littering issue is
lack of responsibility. People find it a hassle to take time looking for trash
bins, so they choose to litter anywhere instead. Although they are fully aware
that they shouldn’t litter, they still do because public parks are not their
own property.
To address the issue, the city should install
more trash bins in the park. Emptying trash bins more often would be helpful as
well. On top of that, citizens themselves should also do their part to keep
parks clean.
번호 | 제목 | 글쓴이 | 조회수 | 날짜 |
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6131 | [OPIc] RE:Industry 첨삭 부탁드립니다 | 첨삭지기 | 89 | 2023.01.25 |
6130 | [OPIc] 첨삭 요청 드려요~~~ | DH | 78 | 2023.01.25 |
6129 | [OPIc] RE:첨삭 요청 드려요~~~ | 첨삭지기 | 82 | 2023.01.25 |
6128 | [OPIc] 첨삭 부탁드립니다!! | DH | 89 | 2023.01.25 |
6127 | [OPIc] RE:첨삭 부탁드립니다!! | 첨삭지기 | 88 | 2023.01.25 |
6126 | [OPIc] 첨삭 부탁드려요~ | EE | 75 | 2023.01.25 |
6125 | [OPIc] RE:첨삭 부탁드려요~ | 첨삭지기 | 92 | 2023.01.25 |
6124 | [OPIc] 첨삭 요청 드립니다 | EE | 98 | 2023.01.25 |
6123 | [OPIc] RE:첨삭 요청 드립니다 | 첨삭지기 | 78 | 2023.01.25 |
6122 | [OPIc] Geography 첨삭 부탁드립니다. | 오픽언제탈출해 | 85 | 2023.01.24 |
6121 | [OPIc] RE:Geography 첨삭 부탁드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 80 | 2023.01.24 |
6120 | [OPIc] 좋아하는 영화 첨삭 부탁드립니다. | Riley | 90 | 2023.01.21 |
6119 | [OPIc] RE:좋아하는 영화 첨삭 부탁드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 94 | 2023.01.21 |
6118 | [OPIc] 가장 좋아하는 방 첨삭 부탁드립니다. | Riley | 86 | 2023.01.21 |
6117 | [OPIc] RE:가장 좋아하는 방 첨삭 부탁드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 87 | 2023.01.21 |
6116 | [OPIc] Transportations 첨삭 부탁드립니다 | 오픽언제탈출해 | 100 | 2023.01.18 |
6115 | [OPIc] RE:Transportations 첨삭 부탁드립니다 | 첨삭지기 | 83 | 2023.01.18 |
6114 | [OPIc] 첨삭 요청 드려요 | 지니 | 90 | 2023.01.18 |
6113 | [OPIc] RE:첨삭 요청 드려요 | 첨삭지기 | 88 | 2023.01.18 |
>> | [OPIc] 첨삭 부탁드립니다 :) | Liz | 99 | 2023.01.18 |
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