Hello, my name is OOO

I',m in my early 20s.

I live in an apartment in Seoul, with my parents and younger brother.

I'm looking for a job as an accounting officer.

I'm interested in accounting because it is mostly practical in real life, and It suits my meticulous nature.

These days my hobbies include listening to music and singing.

I usually listen to monotony sound to relax or sing a loud song to relieve stress.

It’s good for a change of air.

As for my personality, I tend to be goal-oriented.

I set up a goal prudently, and make to-do list in order of priority.

Now My number 1 goal is getting a good grade on the OPIC test.

I’d like to work for a sound company in the field of accounting.

I’m looking forward to starting my career.

부자연스러운 표현이나 문법상 크게 틀린게 없는지 봐주시면 감사하겠습니다:)