You indicated in the survey that you live in and a house. What is your neighborhood like? Where is it located? Please describe your neighborhood in detail.
=> I live in small town near Seoul. My home is close to Ganueng Station. So, I have easy access to Seoul by subway. There are many amenities such as banks, supermarkets, and so on. Also, there is a department store. My neighborhood is very clean and lively. It is good place to live.

I would like to know about your neighborhood. Who are they? What do they do? How often do you interact with them?
=> I think my neighbors are talkative and outgoing. In cafes near my home, there are many people who live near my home and they always talk about something funny. Sometimes, I join them and talk with them. I exercise with them in a fitness club once a week.

Can you tell me about an interesting or memorable experience you have had in your neighborhood? Tell me about the experience in detail and explain what made it memorable.
=> Usually, my neighborhood is boring. However, a big resort recently opened in my neighborhood. The resort held an interesting opening event. It included concerts. I took part in the event and enjoyed concerts. My favorite musician performed on the stage. It is was very exciting experience for me.

How has your neighborhood changed from when you were young? Describe in detail how it was in the past, and how it is now.
=> I live in Uijeongbu. When I was young, there are were many American military units in my neighborhood. However, they moved to other places. The places where they were turned into wonderful parks with a lake. So my family and I often go there and walk along the lake.

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