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I am 33 years old and unmarried

There are four people in my family my parents, older sister and me

I have no job now, so I am looking for a job

When it comes to my personality

Um..My personality is I think I am an outgoing person

So I like to meet people and like to go to a café

when I meet people I feel very happy so I like to spend time to meet people

okay I am going to tell you my hobby

my hobby is watching a movie I usually go to a movie theater with girlfriend at least once a week

I really love to see a movie, it make me feel very relax and I like a science fiction movie

After I see the movie relive stress…