Q. Employee satisfaction is vital to a company's success. agree or disagree

A. I agree that  the employee satisfaction is important to a company's success.

   First reason is that if the employee don't satify working for company, they will not stay longer at there.

   Therefore, the company have to spend money and time for training new employee. that would be ineifficient for success.

   Secondly, higher employee satisfaction means that they are enjoying their jobs.

   To be specific,  their usual work attitude would be planned and efficient and that work efficiency will increase. So the company will be more likely to succeed.

  For that reasons, it's important factor.

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