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- 2020.06.18
My name is Min Ju Jin. I turned 25 years old just two months ago. I live in a house in Suwon with my parents.
These days, I'm looking for a job in the field of marketing. I'd like to work in this field because It seems to be fun. In my free time, I love to go out with my friends or take a walk. I like these activities because they help me lose sense of time.
As for my personality, I tend to be outgoing. I have a large circle of friends and love to make new friends.
I'd really like to work for a big firm. Now that my university education is finished, I', looking forward to starting my career. These days, the job market is very competitive, and finding a job I want is a frustrating process. In order to get into my favorite company, English is a must. So I'm taking this Opic test.
These days, I'm looking for a job in the field of marketing. I'd like to work in this field because It seems to be fun. In my free time, I love to go out with my friends or take a walk. I like these activities because they help me lose sense of time.
As for my personality, I tend to be outgoing. I have a large circle of friends and love to make new friends.
I'd really like to work for a big firm. Now that my university education is finished, I', looking forward to starting my career. These days, the job market is very competitive, and finding a job I want is a frustrating process. In order to get into my favorite company, English is a must. So I'm taking this Opic test.
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