파트6)사람들이 직업상의 성공을 위해 자신의 취미를 포기하는것에 동의하는가 i agree that it is necessary to give up hobbies in order to achieve professional goals. these days the competition is getting tough. because the economy is in bad shape and our economic status is unstable right now. but i do not really know what is causing the economy to worsen and i am not familiar with the global economic situation. but what is certain is that many people are concerned about their personal lives. because it is important to balance work and leisure. let me tell you my story. because it is more effective. i have a friend. he is working at a big company. he want to achieve professional goals. so he has to work almost every day. so he is seriously care about his leisure time. that’s it 라고 답변했는데 채점자가 제가 뭘 의도한지 알아들을 수 있을까가 문제네요 . 크게 점수에 영향이 클까요?