This picture was taken in an office.

The first thing that I can see is a man, who has with a beard,.

-> 그림 묘사에서는 관계대명사를 써서 수식하는 것보다 간결한 문장이 좋습니다.

He is holding a sheet of paper.

-> 두 문장으로 나눠줍니다.

-> sheet 발음주의! ‘seat’이라고 하는 것처럼 들립니다.

Next to him, a woman who has with blonde hair, wearing business suit, is holding a coffee cup.

She is wearing a business suit.

In front of them, there is a copy machine.

-> copy 발음주의! ‘coffee’라고 발음하는 것처럼 들립니다.

it appears a typical scene from an office.

On the left side of the picture, there are meeting rooms with glass windows. There are desks, chairs, and laptops in the room.